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Reality Is My Quiet Place

Im angry that Time is precarious and unforgiving Filthy the illusion of hope/possibility/time and the delusions this brings When I die I hope Ive left with my eyes open Faith in the selfish demeaning nonsensical unfair philosophy of RELIGION?! What is a blessing/being blessed/prayer? What does this do? Be thankful for what? Forgive and forget HA! Endure abuse because ONE DAY . . . hope/possibility/time Hope, possibility and time . . . Nothing’s fully erased Olden impact is rippling Was Truth, now faith-replaced Hope, possibility and time . . . Live now! Carpe diem! Hope steers a delusional life Realize your freedom!

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Deborah Love

Date: 2/4/2013 3:34:00 PM

I like the emotional rhythm of your words.

Susan Palli

Date: 1/6/2013 1:53:00 PM

Could feel the emotions! Good job.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 12/9/2012 2:31:00 AM

a write so true.. a personal relationship with God is a choice, just as religion is another. :) awesome poem. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Richard Palmer

Date: 10/23/2012 4:57:00 AM

wonderful write Comfortable

Sha'Ntez Jefferson

Date: 10/3/2012 7:34:00 PM

wow I see your pen has'nt cooled down keep torchin that paper

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/20/2012 11:36:00 AM

I am finally able to comment on your win in Sara's "My Quiet Place" contest. Congratulations CI. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2012 4:57:00 PM

I have to agree that there is quite a difference in Religion and having the Love of Jesus in our heart..Great expressive work..Thanks for participating in my contest..Congrats on your win..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/17/2012 10:36:00 AM

C I., , , congratulations with your wonderful win in SARA'S sweet " Quiet Place " contest.. have a nice day~ PD