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"Reality is something you rise above." Liza Minelli
Friends declare, “We won’t get very far— not from this town. That’s just how things are!” “Don’t you dare say that!” I scold each time. “That attitude should be deemed a crime.” Ban despair so you’ll be free to see you can make a new reality.
Date: February 17, 2020 Contest: She Inspires Series--LM Placed 6th (of 10) Sponsor: Maureen McGreavy

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Date: 2/29/2020 8:38:00 PM
Bravo Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/1/2020 8:00:00 AM
Thanks so much, Craig. Janice
Date: 2/29/2020 11:07:00 AM
I really like that, making one's reality even BETTER!!! Congrats on the win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/1/2020 8:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Janice
Date: 2/29/2020 8:40:00 AM
Love how you formed this, Janice! Nicely said!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/1/2020 8:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim. Janice
Date: 2/18/2020 6:48:00 AM
That's what it is all about --when rising above--apt for the contest theme but a life lesson as well.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/18/2020 10:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 2/18/2020 1:05:00 AM
Wonderfully done.. Is it so easy to create new poems in a flash.. Great.. Good luck in the contest Janice..
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/18/2020 9:23:00 PM
I like this form..3-6-9.. want to try..Is there any name for this format?
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/18/2020 10:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jenish. This one took a while because of the 3-6-9 format and the rhyme scheme. Janice
Date: 2/17/2020 11:20:00 PM
Well done, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/17/2020 11:27:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line. Janice

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