Reality

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Reality Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron The authenticity of realism stems from life’s birth, the certainty of truth is substantial in time’s ticking, while the presence of verity equals honest self-worth, my white roses are flourishing without thorns pricking. Where the experiences flow I must put myself first, I need acceptance with the Lord’s redemption of accuracy, for His sincerity I break down and crave my thirst, I must bow down with honor and protect His adequacy. When we comprehend the realness life has to offer, we can start fresh in the abundance of laughter’s touch, I shall continue to praise my divine Almighty philosopher, for only I can guess when life feeds me too much. The tangible nature we carry gives us concrete lessons, the Lord has shown me bona fide actual factuality, I shall keep living with a genuine virtue of essence, for only He can sow the seeds of my experienced reality. Date Written: May 18, 2016

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Date: 5/21/2016 1:55:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Laura. It was wonderful hear the audio rendering. ~karam~
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Date: 5/20/2016 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest
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Date: 5/18/2016 3:31:00 PM
the last line summed it up very nicely, Laura. well done! Was this a contest of Nayda's?
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Date: 5/18/2016 7:20:00 PM
Thank you Andrea :) yes her new contest is called "Reality" :)-luloo
Date: 5/18/2016 2:34:00 PM
laura this is a great write for the contest and I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 5/18/2016 7:19:00 PM
thank you Broken Wings :)-luloo
Date: 5/18/2016 12:58:00 PM
Laura Loo, I feel honoured to of been able to read this, so! beautifully! written, spiritually uplifting and true!,so much in here, food for thought, I love the 'white roses with no thorns pricking', and 'we can start fresh in the abundance of laughter’s touch', 'I shall keep living with a genuine virtue of essence', I have seen that too and know it to be true!. THANK YOU!
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Date: 5/18/2016 2:02:00 PM
awwww thank you sweet lady! You just made my day extra special :) You are a sweet woman, many thanks! :)-luloo
Date: 5/18/2016 11:03:00 AM
I whole heartedly agree...lovely
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Date: 5/18/2016 11:37:00 AM
many thanks, Tim :)-luloo
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