Realisation

My head is 
In the air
It is in space

My feet 
Are grounded
They are on earth

My stomach
Is trapped 
In-between

But, that is what
Makes me do
All the things I do

God knows where I am
I am neither here
Nor there
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Hoffman Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 7:16 AM
I can relate to this, Vincent. Nicely written, my friend.
Van Ross Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 10:06 PM
The fact that this poem resonates with you is a great feeling. Thank you so much for your time and appreciation.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Hello Vincent, I like this poem. Well done. Have a nice day my friend.
Van Ross Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 10:33 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Darlene. Have a great day.
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January 19, 2018 at 10:44 AM
Vincent, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Van Ross Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 9:23 AM
Many thanks for your warm welcome and words of encouragement, Linda. Much appreciated.
Hopper Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 8:18 AM
A confusing life indeed! Nice!
Van Ross Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Thanks for your kind words, Anna
One Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 4:44 AM
A pondering poem, deep reflections.. Welcome to poetry soup Vincent..
Van Ross Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:22 AM
Thanks very much for your words of appreciation, Silent One. You have made my day.
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