Real Words

Let me blow life into the weakest part of your nature, we can be statues of time but why 
waste the commandments of your dreams. A new life with me is like eyesight to the blind, i 
can numb the pain that once seemed so great. An addiction to success burns failures lust. 
only time will tell if i am your loves keeper. I only long to conquer your physical with mental 
injections of loyalty and sacrifice.your window of love blinds the essence of my soul, am i a 
slave trapped in your hearts well being. Can my romance enlighten the core of your mind, a 
timeframe for healing is at the tip of my tongue. Relax as i command sensation over ur cloud 
of confusion. Im exploding into the highest level of your fantasies hoping to direct yourr path.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 6:04 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lucious. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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August 9, 2010 at 3:24 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. welcome to PoetrySoup. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
Sweetheart Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 12:33 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family... enjoyed your creative write tonight... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Spence Sr Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 6:43 AM
This is an excellent prose poem. I like the flow of the words. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing, Blessings, Joseph
Brown Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 6:17 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Lucious. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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June 8, 2010 at 4:30 PM
loved it. you seem to have my writing style. or least a little part of it. i loved it!
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