Real, Vulnerable, Myself, Now

Free Verse: Vulnerability

Philosophically, and ideally,
I believe I should be myself,
Which makes me feel vulnerable, unsafe, and insecure.

Practically, and actually,
My philosophical ideal is eclipsed by fear.
So, I protect myself
By hiding my identity, or disguising it with a false identity
To feel safe, secure, and invulnerable.

But, what is my identity?
It's how I feel and act - now, 
Not what I was was yesterday,
Not the story someone wrote for me,
Not what I plan or hope to be tomorrow,
Not what my driver's license or resume says.
It's how I feel and act - now.

There's my homework
Let my actions and outward expressions
Honor what I feel is right
Which is me - 
Now.


Diamante: Vulnerability

Real - 
Vulnerable, Unsafe
False - Safe, Invulnerable
I must be real -
What I feel
Is right - 
Now
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Woods Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 8:07 AM
Hurray David!! See! I truly love your work! Without knowing who wrote this, I chose it as a winner! Congratulations!! Your message is so relatable and real! I was excited to learn about this form...Diamante... as I'd never heard of it b4. Impressive choice and execution of the form! So glad you entered the contest! Xoxo
Crandall Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 4:48 PM
Yay! Thanks Crystol! I'm glad you liked it! and thanks for a creative contest to get me to try a new form, and to think about things. I was a bit embarrassed by this one, didn't seem super poetic. I used your prompt to kind of used it to work out some things that were going through my head.
Greenhough Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 9:55 AM
It has to be within yourself. Taking charge is exhilarating. This is a great, enjoyable and liberating poem. It is a help.
Crandall Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 7:01 PM
Thanks Hilda - I was kind of working out some ideas for myself, but I might have forgot the poetry!
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