Shane Mcneil Poet Free verse

Real Tracks

If my train of thought took to tangible tracks,
(Tracks not abstract but real, in fact)
It would jump and twist--
flash and dash--
In lands where trains are yet to whistle,
With green rolling hills
Where thoughts soar like missiles.
I would stay a long time
(As long as I could)
Speeding so freely where no man has stood.

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Kirby Magee-Dittberner March 4, 2012 at 11:11 PM This poem captures the abstract mind of creative people, which you are surely one of! Unfortunately, I had to give this only an honourable mention because I asked for NEW poems. Where are all your new poems =) I'd like to see some more.