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Real Love

Sometimes we are so close to each other, that we exchange the scent of perfumes we apply, besides sharing the taste of our kisses. We get lost in the woods and feel the thrill of finding each other. We carry pop corns to hill tops, and enjoy a sight of shooting stars. Other times we argue and fight, wondering why we met in the first place; we become angrier when we realize that love for each other is stuck in our hearts like tattoos, becoming hard to replace or remove. I take a stroll that will take me away from you. As I walk across the streets, I see couples of all ages holding each other's arms. All I remember is you.....

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Date: 10/25/2015 3:36:00 PM
Congrats... SKAT
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/14/2015 4:56:00 AM
Thank you Skat! *^_^* <3 <3
Date: 10/22/2015 5:47:00 PM
Hi Teddy, thank you for joining in my contest!!! CONGRATULATIONS to your wonderful love poem... !! Well done!! :O))
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/14/2015 4:55:00 AM
Thank you Aiyah! *^_^* It was a wonderful contest!!! <3 <3
Date: 10/22/2015 1:41:00 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on "A child's first home WIN." **SKAT**
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/14/2015 4:54:00 AM
Thanks Skat! *^_^* <3 <3
Date: 10/5/2015 3:00:00 AM
nice piece on real love.. so calmly composed
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/6/2015 12:53:00 AM
Thanks bro! :-)
Date: 10/1/2015 6:53:00 PM
Your words speak with the power of love won and your mind set flows onto the page letting us relate with you and where your words lead us. Emile.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/2/2015 7:01:00 AM
Thanks Emile! You put in words the state I was in, as I wrote this poem! :-)
Date: 10/1/2015 2:01:00 PM
Teddy, this is wonderfully penned,7, and thanks for visiting my poem, in response ...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/2/2015 6:59:00 AM
You are always welcome BW! ;-) Thanks for enjoying my work! *^_^*
Date: 9/29/2015 10:22:00 PM
A beautiful poem of love Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/30/2015 4:37:00 PM
Thanks Ti! ;-)

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