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I realize I have real eyes That see real lies— ~Nearsighted (rule of law) ~Farsighted (rule of lies) ~The "ayes" have it (hidden agenda) ~The "ayes" have it (secret addenda) ~The "ayes" have it (hate crimes) ~The "ayes" have it (critical times) ~Unmitigated truth (entombed) ~Undocumented lies (exhumed) I realize I have real eyes That see real lies— ~As the world cries *** 12/13/2019 Photo "Imposter" by Gabriela Ferreira on flickr

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Date: 8/11/2020 4:08:00 PM
Well penned and original ~
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Mark Toney
Date: 8/11/2020 8:23:00 PM
Thanks, Line! ~Mark
Date: 1/2/2020 10:14:00 AM
I agree with the others! Clever and creative! If only we were born with these eyes. Well done Mark!
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Mark Toney
Date: 1/2/2020 2:29:00 PM
So true, FJ. If only we were born with them! Thank you for your very encouraging comment and visit. ~Mark
Date: 12/14/2019 5:46:00 PM
Very clever and topical Mark. Enjoyed this over several reads. Love the wordplay and insight. A fave.
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/14/2019 6:46:00 PM
You’re very encouraging, Nina. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the fave. ~Mark