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Ready To Say Goodbye

You look tired and worn out Ready to say goodbye I hold you close Determined not to cry Time for tears when your not here For now my face must smile I talk to you though I doubt you hear helping you along your last mile I hold your hand, telling you I love you Leave you a kiss upon your face so dear See your eyes asking what will you do When you're alone and I am no longer near How can I say that I will die also That my heart will leave with you That living without you, won't be living That my souls crying out to leave too theme used "Leave a kiss" Contest The Poet II Penned 7. September 2014 by Seren Roberts

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Date: 1/27/2015 9:18:00 AM
so sad yet so beautiful ... ! seren you keep on giving to us the means of life , sometimes i just take life for granted "hugs"
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Date: 9/17/2014 4:23:00 AM
Beautiful heartfelt words, I liked your poem! Thank you for gracing my contest, Seren and Congrats on your win, love
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/17/2014 6:28:00 AM
Thank you so much for liking my poem and placing it.....Seren
Date: 9/14/2014 10:54:00 PM
Sad but touching write, congrats on the win, Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2014 12:23:00 AM
Ram thank you so much for commenting...Seren
Date: 9/14/2014 7:14:00 PM
I can relate to this beautifully written poem so well Seren. Congratulations on your win.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/15/2014 12:23:00 AM
Thank you Brenda....Seren
Date: 9/14/2014 6:15:00 PM
This one gave me goose pimples. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/14/2014 1:51:00 PM
so sad, so beautiful I guess many can relate to this write - a worthy winner:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/6/2014 10:02:00 PM
This is so sad Seren....When a loved one leaves it is common to want to leave with them....Beautifully written...hugs Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2014 10:22:00 PM
Thanks Tim for stopping by....Seren

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