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Ready for the big adventure

autumn nest abandoned ~ dreams launched



AP: 3rd place 2025

Submitted on March 18, 2021 for contest LET'S GET CREATIVE WITH HAIKU sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE  -  RANKED 1ST
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Radhakrishna Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 1:24 AM
very beautiful thought! hope launched!! congrats on your win!!
Gauthier Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 4:53 AM
Thank you very much, Krish ~
La France Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:18 PM
Line, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative with Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this excellent non traditional Haiku, well done _Constance
Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Thank you very much, Constance ~
Ligon Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Clever! Congrats!
Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Thanks, Juliet ~
Medders Tobechi Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 10:12 PM
Love it. Good idea.
Gauthier Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 5:08 PM
Thanks, Janis ~
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 4:33 PM
your haiku are always exquisite, many congrats on your win Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 7:31 PM
LOL Thank you very much, Jan. It so happens that I'm actually combing through my old rotten ones and seeing if I can rescue as many of them as I can...
Merryman Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 4:27 PM
An excellent haiku, Line! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 7:32 PM
Thank you very much, Kim ~
Poet Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 3:22 PM
Congratulations, Line, on your Haiku win; you really deserve it; best wishes, Las
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 7:33 PM
Thanks, Las. Much appreciated ~
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 2:12 PM
wow, this is REALLY GOOD. Great twist and well deserved win, Line.
Neumann Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Good dreams. Congratulations on your winning poem ...Kind wishes, Kai
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 7:34 PM
Thank you very much, Kai ~
Y. Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 12:47 PM
Hi Line, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:10 PM
Thank you very much, Alexis ~
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 12:42 PM
- Back with a congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:10 PM
Thank you, Sunshine ~
Gilmour Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 12:31 PM
This is delightful Line many congrats on your win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:11 PM
Most appreciated, Ann ~ thank you
Bangalee Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:47 AM
the abandoned nest is the showcase of nature!
Gauthier Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Mahtab ~
Mcintosh Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 5:44 AM
Lovely - enjoyed so ... God bless you sweet lady, Love, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 6:35 AM
Thank you very much, Gina ~
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 1:47 AM
- Great written, Line :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 6:35 AM
Thank you very much, Sunshine ~
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 1:33 AM
Love the image Line. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 6:35 AM
Thanks, Tom. Most appreciated ~
Krutsinger Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 8:19 PM
Ahh delicate and pretty Line. No surprise here.
Gauthier Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 6:36 AM
lol thanks, Caren ~
Summers Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 8:04 PM
Beautifully written Line. Brevity that expresses so much. John
Gauthier Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 6:36 AM
Thank you, John ~ most appreciated
Hankins Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 7:19 PM
I love this, Line. I see so many when the leaves fall. Each little fledgling surely a dream "launched." Good luck in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 7:21 PM
I love seeing them too ~ thanks, Milton
Sands Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 4:28 PM
Very nice. Great last line too :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 7:21 PM
Thanks, Heidi ~ much appreciated
Rose  Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 4:18 PM
Lovely imagery on this Line, gl in the contest
Gauthier Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Thank you very much ~
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