Reading the Van Gogh Mind

Sea at Les Saintes-Maries-de-la-Mer
Van Gogh sat staring at the choppy waters
Nothing yet? His brother asked. He did not reply.
He was in artist mode.
Picked up a brush and began

Splashing white capped waves
Hostile swirling wind especially above fishing boat
Angry storm began taking form 
So angry the sails were gone from the boat
Van Gogh was in another world; he could hear no one

Bright titanium white horse emerged at the water’s edge
dark delivery wagon and loan figure made a solid contrast
Van Gogh began using wider curvier strokes,
blending one color after another in ombre fashion
His ideas coming faster and faster now

The sky began taking on new colors, new shades, new hues.
He added a reflection of the boat in the water
Five women waiting for their men on shore
A field of wheat leaning toward the west, torn up by the wind.
It was a furious painting, stormy and magnificent. 
He painted this in 1888, the eight such painting 
this year, and one of his favorites. 
But of course he was not satisfied with it.
So he had to create another one.
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Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 7:35 AM
I’ll hop into that painting any time! Grab my hand, my friend!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 2:47 PM
I am ready to jump in there too.
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 8:47 PM
I guess Van Gogh had a ghost painter or something... You're taking it on the chin for a tad for a mere slip of the keyboard. Makes no difference to me... Nice narrative of a painting in process. Very informative for a novice like me. Thanks!! ~ Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 2:48 PM
I cannot believe I did that but I am laughing.
Rigoler Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 5:35 PM
Karen, dear, van Gogh died July 29, 1890, not 1988! I am familiar with this early work. Thanks for your support. / M
Ermine Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 2:38 PM
Hi Caren. This is an Absorbing look into Van Gogh's mind and habits. I love the line.... It was a furious painting, stormy and magnificent'. Your computer auto corrected the year, unless it's abstract, and refers to somebody else's painting. Sorry to be too nosey here. I just changed busrt to burst in mine!
Ermine Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 9:56 PM
Eehh, it's nuthin. We all do it! No worries!!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 2:49 PM
I have changed it now - finally! Ugh! I cannot believe I did that! I had written down the right year, but my mind did not fathom it when we typed it.
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