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Reading Between the Lines

See all these lines That are written on my face Each one tells a story With the line they trace Some lines from hardships The times I got upset Others from the joy Gained from people I've met There are lines around my lips I have always loved to smile The lines have gotten deeper They have been here a while Sure I've had my worries My emotions have been stretched The evidence has appeared On my forehead, visibly etched Mostly they are happy The fine lines around my eyes I've been blessed with laughter I am such a lucky guy Some may wish to hide The lines on their face When it comes to me That isn't the case Each and every line Natures special gift No need for a surgeon to give me a lift After reading Debra Squyres' Poem Life Lines, I was inspired to write the attached Poem. Be sure to read Debra's poem it is excellent.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/9/2015 11:57:00 AM
Mine are a bit slow to come But they sure are coming I will try hard to smile A la Lamoureux!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/9/2015 1:28:00 PM
Thanks for commenting Gerald.
Date: 7/11/2014 5:59:00 PM
Awesome, I think that is great, proud of who you are and where you've been. We are all unique and I think it is uplifting to read poems like this, smile! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2014 6:52:00 PM
Thanks, I think when women allow themselves to age they grow into their beauty. At 52 I have come to appreciate the beauty that accompanies age.
Date: 8/24/2013 5:10:00 PM
Well, you look great to me.... Here's looking at you.....Rick!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/11/2014 6:54:00 PM
How did I miss this one Eileen, your comment has resulted in a delayed blush. You are a sweetheart!
Date: 12/4/2012 4:46:00 PM
Wow Rick....love this sweet poem and awesome title for it! Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2012 5:51:00 PM
Thanks for taking time to read a bunch of poems, I really appreciate it.
Date: 11/4/2012 2:29:00 AM
This too good a Poem Richard. You have narrated all the depths of lines and meaning for us in the most lucid and simple poetic lines. I will definitely visit Debra's Poem Life Lines soon. Thank you for your kind comments on my Poem Aroma of Light. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Richard Lamoureux.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2012 6:41:00 AM
Thanks Ravindra, even your responses are Poetic. I enjoy connecting with your spirit through these words.
Date: 11/4/2012 12:48:00 AM
Good poem Richard, i do like the message very much.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2012 6:43:00 AM
Thanks Shaz, i am glad you are one of those women who embraces her lines. Therefore you have a beauty that will never fade.
Date: 11/4/2012 12:42:00 AM
This poem made my day, thanks. Men look better with their life lines than women, I wonder why?
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2012 6:46:00 AM
You must not have met my wife, she has become more beautiful with each passing year.i am glad I could make your day. Thanks so much for commenting.
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 11/4/2012 12:47:00 AM
I agree jancarl, but i still accept me for me and i embrace my lines. .good and bad
Date: 11/3/2012 9:34:00 PM
Richard...thanks for stopping by....enjoyed your soulful write! Jimbo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2012 6:47:00 AM
My pleasure Jim. I appreciate you stopping by to introduce yourself.
Date: 11/3/2012 7:18:00 PM
Good for you, I am also very proud of my lines, love Elizabeth
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/3/2012 7:41:00 PM
I find women who are comfortable with themselves exude a special kind of beauty and confidence. Thanks for stopping by to read.
Date: 11/3/2012 4:26:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry. I'll be searching for Debra's next. Also thank you for your comment on my poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/3/2012 4:31:00 PM
Your welcome Carol, thanks for taking time to stop by.
Date: 11/3/2012 3:21:00 PM
This is a really great write! Good job Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/3/2012 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Jordan, appreciate you coming by for a peak.

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