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Reaching My Pinnacle - Contest

At the top of my mountain
Were many writers of words
Each step I took was fraught with despair
They were so good
I tentatively wrote and pasted on my page
No comment received
My heart sunk, was I that useless
Picking up the pen I started another
Yet another and another.
One day a comment appeared
My heart was bursting with joy
I had arrived, 
someone deemed to comment
My journey to perfection had started
This was my achievement my aim.
Thank you to that person for helping me 
Reach my pinnacle.



Penned  16 September 2014

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Tim Smith Date: 9/16/2014 7:49:00 PM The more you write the more confident you get....wonderful Seren...hugs Tim Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/16/2014 10:15:00 PM Thx Tim .........Seren

Jan Allison Date: 9/16/2014 5:29:00 PM I guess we can all relate to this write Seren - that first comment you get is amazing- hope this does well for you:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/16/2014 10:18:00 PM Yep. That still applies though am chuffed when I get the first comment on a poem that I doubt myself.....Seren

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/16/2014 2:34:00 PM beautiful write Seren. I bet you had arrived long before then. Magic is inbred.Best of luck in the contest i think it will rate high. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/16/2014 10:16:00 PM If you read my first poems here u will see what I meant.....Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/16/2014 9:53:00 AM Nice analogical write. good luck, Seren Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 9/16/2014 10:16:00 PM Thank you .....Seren