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Reaching For the Sun

Looking out the door I see a lovely flower Reaching for the Sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/28/2008 9:40:00 PM
Elizabeth, Perfect Haiku I can see the Flower Stretching its stem so its head sees Heaven Always...HG
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Date: 12/6/2008 4:58:00 PM
Lovely imagery and word choices... a delightful HAIKU Elizabeth! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/4/2008 5:48:00 PM
i love the hope portrayed in your poem good job
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Date: 11/19/2008 3:56:00 PM
Welcome to Poetrysoup. This is a "lovely" poem. Thank you for your kind words. I am fairly new here myself. There are so many talented writers on this site. I know you will enjoy it here, I do. So keep writing (and reading). Thank you for sharing your work with me. Robin
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Date: 11/19/2008 1:51:00 PM
Simple. Lovely flow and image. Well done Elizabeth! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/16/2008 8:54:00 AM
Ah this is very optimistic! Loved it, filled me with sun's energy. Welcome to poetrysoup! Love, Chitra
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Date: 11/16/2008 7:11:00 AM
Breathtaking haiku! Welcome to the soup and thank you for such a lovely comment! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/15/2008 9:04:00 AM
What an uplifting poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/15/2008 5:37:00 AM
Paints a wonderful picture..good job. BG
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Date: 11/14/2008 11:40:00 PM
Lovely word use and flow! Welcome to the Soup!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/14/2008 8:42:00 PM
Nice, 5-7-5 flow and good conecept, welcome to poetry soup...Raul
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