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Reach Out

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brokenhearted
hanging by a thread
how far can arms extend

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10/19/19
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Elaine Perrin November 13, 2019 at 2:49 PM Very touching, congratulations x Hello There November 13, 2019 at 8:45 PM Thank you so much, Elaine :)

Richard Lamoureux November 3, 2019 at 7:32 AM A well deserved win, no thanks required. Hugs Rick. Hello There November 3, 2019 at 9:14 PM Hugs <3

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2019 at 7:53 PM this is one of the best I am seeing. Congrats for the win. I liked the assonance of it. Hello There November 1, 2019 at 9:41 PM That means a lot, Andrea ~ thank you so very much :)

Harry Horsman November 1, 2019 at 7:09 PM so many arms need to hold to love. awesome question and poem, congratulations Hello There November 1, 2019 at 9:41 PM Wow, thank you so much, harry, for your kind words and visit :)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2019 at 2:21 PM - Congratulations on your win, H.T. :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Hello There November 1, 2019 at 9:40 PM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise ~ You, too <3 hugs :)

Chris Green November 1, 2019 at 1:45 PM See, I told you they could extend as far as needed. Congrats my friend. Hello There November 1, 2019 at 9:39 PM Aw, thank you, Chris :)

Sandra Adams November 1, 2019 at 10:40 AM congratulations...well done HT :) hugs Hello There November 1, 2019 at 1:12 PM Thank you so much, Sandra :) hugs

Jeanne Mcgee November 1, 2019 at 10:24 AM I always hope my arms can reach....love your zen...congrats! Hello There November 1, 2019 at 1:10 PM What a beautiful thing to say ~ and thank you for the congrats!!

Kim Rodrigues November 1, 2019 at 9:00 AM I like your extra zing with arrows! Well done! Congratulations! Hello There November 1, 2019 at 1:09 PM Lol. Thank you so much, Kim ;)

John Lawless November 1, 2019 at 8:58 AM ah, beyond the physical and metaphoric into the spiritual in three lines....fantastic..... Hello There November 1, 2019 at 1:09 PM Thank you so much, John ~ I am glad you enjoyed all the pieces and parts in this itty bitty little ditty ;)

Richard Lamoureux November 1, 2019 at 8:43 AM Congrats on top place In my contest. ;0) thanksfor entering my contest. Hello There November 1, 2019 at 1:06 PM Thank you so much, Richard. I really appreciate the challenge and the placement, my friend :)

Gershon Wolf October 24, 2019 at 12:56 PM So touching, heart-rending really, HT. Best entry I've read to date. See you in the contest's winner circle! :) gw Gershon Wolf November 4, 2019 at 5:32 PM I stlll think that this is the #1 best #1... Nevertheless, it came in awfully close. Beautifully written, H.T. Congrats! Cheers, Gershon Hello There October 24, 2019 at 4:31 PM Thank you, Gershon... <3

Michelle Faulkner October 21, 2019 at 2:20 PM This is so moving, so full of comfort, I think this will do well in the contest... Hello There October 21, 2019 at 4:35 PM Thank you so much, Michelle ~ I really appreciate your kind feedback :)

Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 7:14 AM If they are the arms of a true friend, they can extend as long as is needed. Loved this my friend. Beautifully done. Hello There October 21, 2019 at 12:54 PM Lovely comment ~ Thank you, Chris :)

Silent One October 20, 2019 at 3:09 PM It all depends on the rights arms.... Nice on.. Hello There October 20, 2019 at 11:22 PM Thank you, Silent One ~

Regina Mcintosh October 19, 2019 at 10:27 PM This is truly a inspiration. God bless you always, Gina Hello There October 20, 2019 at 12:04 AM Thank you so much, Gina ~ blessings to you always, my friend <3

Vijay Pandit October 19, 2019 at 4:19 PM Wisdom of Zen in your photo and your words..excellent! Hello There October 20, 2019 at 12:04 AM Thrilled to read this response from you ~ thank you, my friend <3

Sandra Adams October 19, 2019 at 2:58 PM if the heart and soul are involved they can reach pretty far...good one my friend :) Hello There October 20, 2019 at 12:01 AM A lovely thing to hear, my sweet friend ~ thank you <3

Andrea Dietrich October 19, 2019 at 1:32 PM superlative one!! Hello There October 20, 2019 at 12:00 AM Thank you, my friend <3

Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2019 at 11:25 AM - Excellent written, H.T. ... infinitely far ... when the heart is in the right place :) - Good luck i the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Hello There October 19, 2019 at 11:59 PM Thank you for a beautiful comment, Anne-Lise <3 hugs

Quoth Theraven October 19, 2019 at 10:53 AM Hello Hello, Very nice poem, though I don't know the Questionku form of poetry. Good luck in the contest. -Richard Hello There October 19, 2019 at 11:58 PM The Questionku was the required format with specific amount of syllables on each line, no capitalization, and ending with a question. Go on, give it a try, Richard! And thank you for leaving a lovely comment :)