Reach

By: Haley Daniels Reach Gasping for air, life, and love As I watch the tangled hands from above The water is green with guilt and greed It is time for the famished beasts to feed Naked I lay here, preparing to die Faint sounds of my crew starting to cry Any hope of survival has drifted away The sadness takes over, it’s too late to pray Inspired by Watson and the Shark

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Skat A

Date: 5/7/2016 2:47:00 AM

Haley Daniels, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2016 11:57:00 PM

Haley Daniels, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. :) Love -LINDA-

Cory Long

Date: 6/3/2011 11:21:00 AM

this was wonderful keep the poems coming.. cory

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/2/2011 3:18:00 PM

Very creative and interesting write, Haley

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2011 12:49:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry.. a delight..enjoy the site as u continue to share stunning words with luv..

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 6/2/2011 6:05:00 AM

welcome here in the poetry soup..hope you'll find this group so comfortable to share with your thoughts,feelings and ideas,..through poetries, comments and even suggestions for improvements... ***jun-jun

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/2/2011 5:00:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Haley. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol