Olusegun Arowolo Poet Personification

Rays of Hope

Sun brightens with full blaze and smile,
darkness covers the sun like a blanket-total eclipse,
Moon rays spread out their hands from this shield.



CONTEST:"Trinity" sponsored by Debbie Guzzi.

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Poet Destroyer A November 10, 2012 at 6:05 PM Olusegun... love the win...pd

Andrea Dietrich November 8, 2012 at 11:43 PM Nicely done, and won!!! Good to see you again on another winners list!

Debbie Guzzi November 8, 2012 at 3:41 PM Just loved your use of personification! Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2012 at 3:12 PM Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Trinity" contest - well done - Huggs / / Anne-Lise :)

Barbara Gorelick November 8, 2012 at 11:40 AM congrats on your win and the lovely " moon rays". BG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 8, 2012 at 8:48 AM Congratulations on your fine win xx

Carol Sunshine Brown November 8, 2012 at 8:32 AM Congratulations on your win Olusegun. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A October 27, 2012 at 9:20 PM O.A., nice image.. enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD

Omneya Kamal October 27, 2012 at 12:36 PM Loved it! Good luck with the contest :), Omneya