Rays of Grace

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Today, I look up at the torpid sky, as I ponder why the sun is hiding, around a shroud of arrogance, don’t you know how slow my heart is? a desire for brighter days, trying to wipe away my tears? today, my spirit longs for a ray of serenity. Written: November 07, 2022

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Valsa George

Date: 11/7/2022 7:55:00 PM

When sky is dark and air is damp, we slip into a state of gloom. Brighter days make our hearts also bright ! Let the sun come out from his hiding. Beautiful poem and picture.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/7/2022 2:05:00 PM

Depressing sunless days! yet, we keep hope light is emerging, just around the corner.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/7/2022 8:07:00 AM

Well written. I hope the serenity arrives :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/7/2022 6:49:00 AM

I love this: " I ponder why the sun is hiding, around a shroud of arrogance..." Very impressive writing, my dearest, Lasaad! Yes, we sometimes need a more vivacious sun! Excellent! Blessings!