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Rays of Grace

Today, I look up at the torpid sky,
as I ponder why the sun is hiding,
around a shroud of arrogance,
don’t you know how slow my heart is?
a desire for brighter days,
trying to wipe away my tears?
today, my spirit longs for a ray of serenity.

Written: November 07, 2022

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Valsa George November 7, 2022 at 7:55 PM When sky is dark and air is damp, we slip into a state of gloom. Brighter days make our hearts also bright ! Let the sun come out from his hiding. Beautiful poem and picture.

Vijay Pandit November 7, 2022 at 2:05 PM Depressing sunless days! yet, we keep hope light is emerging, just around the corner.

Heidi Sands November 7, 2022 at 8:07 AM Well written. I hope the serenity arrives :)

Demetrios Trifiatis November 7, 2022 at 6:49 AM I love this: " I ponder why the sun is hiding, around a shroud of arrogance..." Very impressive writing, my dearest, Lasaad! Yes, we sometimes need a more vivacious sun! Excellent! Blessings!