Beata Agustin Poet Tanka

RAYS AND RAINS

rays and rains
blessings from God* of heaven
scorching or drenching???
since health matters most
umbrella brings hope

*Zechariah 10:1 - Ask ye of the LORD rain in the time of the latter rain; so the LORD shall make bright clouds, and give them showers of rain, to every one grass in the field.

December 29, 2024
2nd place, "Sanford-style tanka - A PICTURE PROMPT" Poetry Writing Contest	Sponsored by Suzette Richards; judged on 1/8/2025

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Emmanuel Obeng Yeboah January 19, 2025 at 4:00 AM Hi Beata, I love how you are able to use your unique poetic style to communicate much without saying much. Nice piece

Susan Ashley January 1, 2025 at 9:09 AM Dear Beata, I adore your poem and the alliteration of your first line. Your last line is a wonderful finale as it can bring relief from both sun and storm. Warmest wishes for a happy new year my poet friend.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich December 31, 2024 at 11:20 AM Love you take on the picture. Best of luck in this challenge. H appt new year, Beata.