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A peacock in old Shangri-La Found his wherewithal did not thaw He went by the book So his feathers shook But aroused his mother-in-law

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Date: 3/21/2019 2:28:00 PM
Horny Old Lady! Yasou and poetry hugs Rico, Jenny.
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Date: 3/19/2019 6:53:00 PM
awesome last line!!
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Date: 3/18/2019 6:44:00 PM
Oh, this one is so daringly fun! Shades of "The Graduate" movie!
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Date: 3/18/2019 6:37:00 PM
oh how funny Rico:-) hugs Jan xx
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