Raw Perceptions

Tangled thoughts tumble
 onto yarns of jumbled concepts,
 which form ideas
 that weave raw perceptions
 into cashmere images.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 7:23 PM
big congrats with your very clever poem, JOseph. Belatedly!!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 10:19 PM
Such creativity and wonderful words...cashmere...the finest of choice! Well done. :)
Haight Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 2:06 PM
So much said about the creative process in these few words, Joseph. Congratulations on your podium win. Sandra
Scars Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 10:54 AM
Joseph, I really really like this one...congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 7:05 AM
Well woven thoughts, congratulations Joseph...
Grasso Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 6:55 AM
Lovely thoughts turned into a pretty poem! Congratulations, Joseph! ...Fran
Neumann Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 6:15 AM
Great. Congratulations. 'Cashmere images'. Very philosophical, short and sweet and thus to the point. many wishes, Kai
A   Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 8:21 PM
Joseph, congrats on your WOOLISH win. XOX -LINDA-
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Joseph, I wanted to see this higher on the list. It is awesome. Congrats on your win.
Callus Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 1:43 PM
Very creative, Joseph; would have expected this to place higher. Congrats on your win. // paul
A  Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Joseph, Congrats on your Wooly wool win. Love **SKAT **
Inman Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Joseph, beautiful phrases and such imagery, great write.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 4:20 AM
Congrats on ur winning write Joseph! Great work!
Cwiak Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 12:18 AM
Wonderful write, Joseph. Congrats on this winner.
T  Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 11:21 PM
thank you
Legend Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 1:16 AM
great poem.....keep it up.
May Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Thank you LL
Nunez Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:45 AM
The title as metaphor for a person's psyche ... very creative Joseph. You write short, but deep! Best in the contest! Kim
May Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Thank you Kim
Onclaud Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:21 AM
enjoyed this allusion to one's mind.. very creative, joseph!..huggs
May Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Thank you nette
Fisher Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 5:59 PM
Your wool is cool and clever. Hope you do well in the contest.
May Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Thank you David, I hope so too
Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 5:48 PM
VERY cleverly done, Joseph. I was thinking it was tanka!!
May Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Thank you Andrea, I was going to do a tanka. but the second line was too long...so it became free verse
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