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Raw Perceptions

Tangled thoughts tumble
 onto yarns of jumbled concepts,
 which form ideas
 that weave raw perceptions
 into cashmere images.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2016 7:23:00 PM

big congrats with your very clever poem, JOseph. Belatedly!!

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/23/2016 10:19:00 PM

Such creativity and wonderful words...cashmere...the finest of choice! Well done. :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/23/2016 2:06:00 PM

So much said about the creative process in these few words, Joseph. Congratulations on your podium win. Sandra

Beautiful Scars

Date: 9/23/2016 10:54:00 AM

Joseph, I really really like this one...congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/23/2016 7:05:00 AM

Well woven thoughts, congratulations Joseph...

Francis J Grasso

Date: 9/23/2016 6:55:00 AM

Lovely thoughts turned into a pretty poem! Congratulations, Joseph! ...Fran

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/23/2016 6:15:00 AM

Great. Congratulations. 'Cashmere images'. Very philosophical, short and sweet and thus to the point. many wishes, Kai

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/29/2016 8:21:00 PM

Joseph, congrats on your WOOLISH win. XOX -LINDA-

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2016 3:30:00 PM

Joseph, I wanted to see this higher on the list. It is awesome. Congrats on your win.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/24/2016 1:43:00 PM

Very creative, Joseph; would have expected this to place higher. Congrats on your win. // paul

Skat A

Date: 1/21/2016 12:16:00 PM

Joseph, Congrats on your Wooly wool win. Love **SKAT **

James Inman

Date: 1/21/2016 10:31:00 AM

Joseph, beautiful phrases and such imagery, great write.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/21/2016 4:20:00 AM

Congrats on ur winning write Joseph! Great work!

Dan Cwiak

Date: 1/21/2016 12:18:00 AM

Wonderful write, Joseph. Congrats on this winner.

C T

Date: 1/20/2016 11:21:00 PM

thank you

Legendary Legend

Date: 1/8/2016 1:16:00 AM

great poem.....keep it up.

Joseph May
Date: 1/8/2016 10:05:00 AM

Thank you LL

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/7/2016 9:45:00 AM

The title as metaphor for a person's psyche ... very creative Joseph. You write short, but deep! Best in the contest! Kim

Joseph May
Date: 1/8/2016 10:04:00 AM

Thank you Kim

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/7/2016 5:21:00 AM

enjoyed this allusion to one's mind.. very creative, joseph!..huggs

Joseph May
Date: 1/8/2016 10:04:00 AM

Thank you nette

David Fisher

Date: 1/5/2016 5:59:00 PM

Your wool is cool and clever. Hope you do well in the contest.

Joseph May
Date: 1/5/2016 6:53:00 PM

Thank you David, I hope so too

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2016 5:48:00 PM

VERY cleverly done, Joseph. I was thinking it was tanka!!

Joseph May
Date: 1/5/2016 6:53:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, I was going to do a tanka. but the second line was too long...so it became free verse

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