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kisses.
feel them
the tension and aliveness
they’re loaded with psychology and social context

its an intense observation
mouths connect our inner and outer worlds
they cross the exterior-interior divide
they’re simple forms of passion and expression
but they’re drastic and emphatic

I wrestle with wildness
I desire less breathing room, less layering
I riot with instinctive response
I long to obliterate feminine’ restraint
and share inner experience
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A song for this:
Drive Me Crazy by The SoCal VoCals
Fly Into Your Arms (a cappella) by X-Cetra
Nothing Can Stop Us by Saint Etienne
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Conn Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 9:55 AM
Are you spying on me from one of your fluid-filled cell signaling private properties? = ] What is it about four-letter words and their association with lust (ahead) of intimacy?
Fallica Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 4:14 AM
<3 . A kiss is just a kiss. Many we toss around like so much candy. But some aren’t. Some are meals. Song for this: ‘Casablanca - As Time Goes By - Original Song by Sam (Dooley Wilson)
Fallica Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 7:16 AM
. I know . . . I remember .
Vionet Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:50 AM
Oh, sure - I'm not talking 'la bise' - I'm talking about the lose your breath and poise, exchange bodily fluid, get a room kind of kiss. =]
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