Raw Emotions

Unravel me into a simple thread,
Re-knit my emotions like a blanket over my bare chest.
Clothe me 
In memories and admiration.
Weave conscience and judgement around every unspoken word.
Dress me
In the most human of robes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Scars Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 10:58 AM
love this dear Riley...congrats :)-luloo
Hamilton Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:00 AM
This is spectacular writing Riley, I think the first time reading you, but, definitely not the last, congrats on a fine win in my contest!
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 10:39 PM
Well done. Congrats on your win, Riley.
Roper Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 11:55 AM
Wow, sweet words to swoon too..... Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Canerdy Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 12:05 PM
Excellent poem making very effective use of simile and metaphor, Riley--CONGRATS on your win!..Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 8:14 PM
I like the last line!
Hood Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 8:15 PM
thank you :)
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