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Raw Emotions

Unravel me into a simple thread, Re-knit my emotions like a blanket over my bare chest. Clothe me In memories and admiration. Weave conscience and judgement around every unspoken word. Dress me In the most human of robes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/9/2018 10:58:00 AM
love this dear Riley...congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/6/2018 9:00:00 AM
This is spectacular writing Riley, I think the first time reading you, but, definitely not the last, congrats on a fine win in my contest!
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Date: 12/22/2017 10:39:00 PM
Well done. Congrats on your win, Riley.
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Date: 12/19/2017 11:55:00 AM
Wow, sweet words to swoon too..... Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/18/2017 12:05:00 PM
Excellent poem making very effective use of simile and metaphor, Riley--CONGRATS on your win!..Janice
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Date: 12/3/2017 8:14:00 PM
I like the last line!
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Riley Hood
Date: 12/3/2017 8:15:00 PM
thank you :)

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