Notes About The Poem

Ravishing and Ripped

                             11/29/2023



           She daydreamed of his body, so strong.
           Now was that really so morally wrong?
           A man with shining, ripped, physicality
           And eyes as inviting, as the green, deep sea.

           Recalling their splendid nights together.
           Nights absent of any of innocent demeanor.
           Unbridled passion, twas a magic hook.
           All published one day in a poetry book!

           Readers eager to relive vividly their heat?
           Ah, their passions, one day shall surely meet!


Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Elliott Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 11:29 AM
Dag-gone Pangie, he sure is beautiful. I'm old and gray but still notice male beauty, lol!!!! Stellar accompanying poem. xxxx
Goldsmith Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 7:48 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun hot write. Take Care... Have a great/wonderful day writing away.........
Romios Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 8:31 PM
Paula tis was fun! How did you know! I am quite young in spirit and thought. It’s always fun to have you in my life, girl! Tomorrow? More zany writing.)) Tee hee! Yahoozie. Pangie xx
Wolf Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 7:27 PM
Physicality is surely a property of magnetic reality. Steamy stuffy, my dear! ~ gw
Romios Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 7:39 PM
Yes.steamy is an apt adjective, I am chuckling because I am hardly young.. neither walkers nor wheelchairs are interesting.. and you and Elena had the chutzpah and immense courage to comment..to you both, is my ultimate respect and appreciation. Pangie xxxxxxxxx
Eagle Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 8:21 AM
Hot, hot, hot is what I have to say about this poem today. What a great poem!
Romios Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 8:53 AM
You are a total crack-up, and fun poetess! Must be why you love people and life. So grateful you have a sense of humor!!?..As usual, I tell it like it is, it’s too bad, I can’t comment more, these days. Pain in the arms is overwhelming.. And you are the only poeti Iknow wgo got a POTD for a Monoku. Zowie! Pangie xxxx
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace