Ravishing and Ripped

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11/29/2023 She daydreamed of his body, so strong. Now was that really so morally wrong? A man with shining, ripped, physicality And eyes as inviting, as the green, deep sea. Recalling their splendid nights together. Nights absent of any of innocent demeanor. Unbridled passion, twas a magic hook. All published one day in a poetry book! Readers eager to relive vividly their heat? Ah, their passions, one day shall surely meet!

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Regina Elliott

Date: 11/30/2023 11:29:00 AM

Dag-gone Pangie, he sure is beautiful. I'm old and gray but still notice male beauty, lol!!!! Stellar accompanying poem. xxxx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/29/2023 7:48:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your fun hot write. Take Care... Have a great/wonderful day writing away.........

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/29/2023 8:31:00 PM

Paula tis was fun! How did you know! I am quite young in spirit and thought. It’s always fun to have you in my life, girl! Tomorrow? More zany writing.)) Tee hee! Yahoozie. Pangie xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/29/2023 7:27:00 PM

Physicality is surely a property of magnetic reality. Steamy stuffy, my dear! ~ gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/29/2023 7:39:00 PM

Yes.steamy is an apt adjective, I am chuckling because I am hardly young.. neither walkers nor wheelchairs are interesting.. and you and Elena had the chutzpah and immense courage to comment..to you both, is my ultimate respect and appreciation. Pangie xxxxxxxxx

Elena Eagle

Date: 11/29/2023 8:21:00 AM

Hot, hot, hot is what I have to say about this poem today. What a great poem!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/29/2023 8:53:00 AM

You are a total crack-up, and fun poetess! Must be why you love people and life. So grateful you have a sense of humor!!?..As usual, I tell it like it is, it’s too bad, I can’t comment more, these days. Pain in the arms is overwhelming.. And you are the only poeti Iknow wgo got a POTD for a Monoku. Zowie! Pangie xxxx