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"Ravished" Soft soliloquays whispered to an undressed screen the romance of it all fever ridden sent zipped and unzipped sensually feather light precocious tongues in cheek checked tickling ryhmes let your fingers do the walking like long legs wrapped around hearts saddled like hors d’oevres devils on horseback sauced, sent, ravished (LadyLabyrinth / 2023)

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Date: 8/7/2023 5:11:00 AM
O' yes this , "" like long legs wrapped around hearts saddled "", so many such great verses. Your brain is awesome my friend. Another fav. God bless....
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/7/2023 7:32:00 AM
Nothing wrong with having a truly great poetic mind my friend. God blessed you and you rightly share that gift with the world. The true poet has an altered mind. And yes, sometimes we may think it is crazy. Wakes us late at night to write, etc. GOD bless...
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/7/2023 6:41:00 AM
I guarantee you this, many will debate the state of my mind aligned with your generous spirit of thought. C'est la vie... que sera sera ... merci
Date: 8/6/2023 7:17:00 AM
"To Catch a Thief"/Lovage, Nathanial Merriweather, Jennifer Charles
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 8/6/2023 7:18:00 AM
https://youtu.be/xfu2Gp-PrTQ

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