Ravens Song

Raven,my song
Please sing to me.
Sing me to sleep.
My lovely lullaby
just under the stars tonight.

I want to feel the dead.
Over come with mincing dread. 
It's just a nightmare,
a silly dream.
Oh so wont you just please,
sing.

So lets see.
The moon shine by firefly's
as I rock my baby
to sleep tonight.
As Raven watches there lives go by
They take the time to sing
The alluring lullaby's.

My precious world,
under silly stone things.
It's name forever written
never to be changed.
Raven Please sing to me
My lullaby.

The hearts stop ticking time
for now we are free
to be what ever we wish to be
among the dead 
singing an alluring song
A lullaby.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 11:47 AM
I am stopping by today to thank you so much for your kind comments and to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry Kristenna. I hope you have a wonderful weekend full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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March 2, 2011 at 6:09 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Kristenna. Love, Carol
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January 21, 2011 at 6:13 PM
I love it Kristenna, it has a tinge of Dark, with a dusting of love and emotion. Or has the writer lured the reader. Welcome to the Soup....:)
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January 17, 2011 at 2:09 PM
The poem has a good lyrical quality and I see a promising poet to read , Keep it up, Kristenna
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January 17, 2011 at 4:27 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kristenna. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
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January 16, 2011 at 6:49 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight .. good luck in the contest for Constance about her imaginary character of Raven... hope your time on Soup will be filled with sharing with luv..
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