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Ravens Song

Raven,my song Please sing to me. Sing me to sleep. My lovely lullaby just under the stars tonight. I want to feel the dead. Over come with mincing dread. It's just a nightmare, a silly dream. Oh so wont you just please, sing. So lets see. The moon shine by firefly's as I rock my baby to sleep tonight. As Raven watches there lives go by They take the time to sing The alluring lullaby's. My precious world, under silly stone things. It's name forever written never to be changed. Raven Please sing to me My lullaby. The hearts stop ticking time for now we are free to be what ever we wish to be among the dead singing an alluring song A lullaby.

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Date: 4/8/2011 11:47:00 AM
I am stopping by today to thank you so much for your kind comments and to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry Kristenna. I hope you have a wonderful weekend full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2011 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Kristenna. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/21/2011 6:13:00 PM
I love it Kristenna, it has a tinge of Dark, with a dusting of love and emotion. Or has the writer lured the reader. Welcome to the Soup....:)
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:09:00 PM
The poem has a good lyrical quality and I see a promising poet to read , Keep it up, Kristenna
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:27:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kristenna. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2011 6:49:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight .. good luck in the contest for Constance about her imaginary character of Raven... hope your time on Soup will be filled with sharing with luv..
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