Raven's Dream

Through the sky's sharp edge
A mystery springs,
As birds aim their preys.
Misty tombs of rock,
Spilling grief like wine.

Exit from time,
A lapse of blow.
A trip to find
The Limbo's Island.

None left,
Just her guarding
Last bliss points.

With guns
Of lust

Empty.


valeria iliadou - Among The Dead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 6, 2011 at 5:03 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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February 5, 2011 at 6:47 AM
Super sensational write Valeria .. good luck in Constance's contest with this piece on Raven... wonderful story .. especiall the Limbo Island luv..
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February 4, 2011 at 6:22 PM
awww, deep, "guns of lust" good write, enjoyed this one,..p.d.
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