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Raven's Dream

Through the sky's sharp edge A mystery springs, As birds aim their preys. Misty tombs of rock, Spilling grief like wine. Exit from time, A lapse of blow. A trip to find The Limbo's Island. None left, Just her guarding Last bliss points. With guns Of lust Empty. valeria iliadou - Among The Dead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 2/6/2011 5:03:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 2/5/2011 6:47:00 AM
Super sensational write Valeria .. good luck in Constance's contest with this piece on Raven... wonderful story .. especiall the Limbo Island luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:22:00 PM
awww, deep, "guns of lust" good write, enjoyed this one,..p.d.
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