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Lanterne Contest sponsored by Joseph May

November 15, 2023

when ravens cry it will oft' foreshadow death

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2023 8:37:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2023 2:10:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, Lin :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/19/2023 8:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Ravens Cry" is a creative Lanterne write/picture. Is your new name Mrs. Poe??? Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day/week......................

Lin Lane
Date: 11/19/2023 8:21:00 AM

lol Paula. There are times when I get in Poe mood, but not to the point that he did, although I greatly admire his poetry. Thank you.

Joseph May

Date: 11/18/2023 3:16:00 AM

Nicely done Lin, Congrats on your win

Lin Lane
Date: 11/18/2023 3:21:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph.

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/17/2023 11:37:00 AM

Lin, your talent shines through your Lanterne, chock full of terrific imagery! Good Luck and Happy Friday xxoo

Lin Lane
Date: 11/17/2023 12:17:00 PM

Your remarks leave me with a smile. Thanks, Mike and have a sweet weekend.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/17/2023 1:05:00 AM

Ravens cry above my head a lot every day. I caw back. Now I'm worried about the birds. Nice poem.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/17/2023 12:16:00 PM

I’ve always felt eerie when I see or hear them. Thank you, Hilda.

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/16/2023 1:50:00 AM

Reminds me of Alfred Hitchcock's "The Birds". Now how about a happy poem? Ive had enough dark poetry for one day. Death will come soon enough! Good to see you, my dear. Hope you had a super day!

Lin Lane
Date: 11/17/2023 12:15:00 PM

Okie Dokie, Danny. I’ll write something more lighthearted.