Ravelled In Travels and Timbreless Tales

Ever         Know                  True

On           Irrisistible            Insight

Night        Luminessence      Must 

Shores      Luring                  Ever                




copyright Joe Maverick 2011:)
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Neels Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 11:10 PM
one done in the unique way that I've become accustomed to when it comes to your work Joe ;-) I enjoyed it this morning! Love Wilma
Ball Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 2:35 PM
Ooooo! Mix an Match. Just like shopping in the dept. stores. ;) This is really clever Joe. A fun piece. God Bless, JB
Wesley Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 12:12 PM
I read straight down then across and both made wonderful sense. Great thoughts in this to enjoy!
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November 12, 2011 at 8:39 PM
This is really a unique poem. I see it can be read in more than one way. So creative. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind comment. Karen
Mac Donald Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 9:20 PM
oie yoie...where to start, Joe! 'Luminessence On Shores Luring Irrisistable Night"...I'll come back to this, for sure!!:) This might be a puzzle, or a jumble of interesting words to peak one's imagination. 'Must Insight Ever Know True Luring On Night Shores"...Oh Geppetto, why Must I have a wooden head? Love, Mikki :)
Fiery Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 12:25 PM
unique write and good to learn new things ...atleast for me...gr8 one over here !
Mitchell Jr. Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 3:43 PM
Cool! Very original. A fun style of write.
Ball Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 4:52 PM
very different style Joe, very interesting" Your works are always so different, but in good health and vision we all fo our thing, thank you for the comment and of course you read this before but I had to re-edit it because is says a whole lot more than the first one, so God bless
Ball Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 4:52 PM
very different style Joe, very interesting" Your works are always so different, but in good health and vision we all fo our thing, thank you for the comment and of course you read this before but I had to re-edit it because is says a whole lot more than the first one, so God bless
George   Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 7:14 PM
Eons Kill Time - very creative and clever Acrostic, Joe. and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 3:39 PM
well this Eon appeals to me Joe.. lovely presentation and interesting words of visuality.. now about that cold bath.. had another poet remark in almost the same vein.. no wonder my hubby takes so many cold showers..haha.. glad u had some fun with my hotty Tanka luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 5:08 AM
thankxx Joe for your always warm and welcome comments on my poetry.. feel the same about your words also luv.. hope u are doing well ..
Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 4:09 AM
Enjoyed reading this morn..I especially like the first two columns..If this is for a contest, good luck..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work.Cody and I talked this morn..He seems better..He says that he slept well..I hope that he is back on schedule of night sleeping..Sara
Johnson Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Great verse big Joe, just stopped here now go:) on ya, Don
Johnson Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 3:21 PM
Great verse big Joe, just stopped here now go:) on ya, Don
Onclaud Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 5:03 AM
stunning, each word leading to the other with meaning and substance, joe..:) huggs
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 11:01 PM
Hmm so this is meant to be eons kill time? That is really cool (well not the meaning, but how you did it!!) I think time is a major bastard. I want to get Gino to drop kick him. hahaha.
Foulk Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 8:55 PM
Yes Joe this was a very creative piece of work. enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on God's Masterpiece and Summers gone by.
La France Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 4:12 PM
Very creative Joe, interesting form, I must give this a try and thanks so much for your kind words on my poetry~~
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June 21, 2011 at 2:16 PM
Eons kill time. Wow! What a clever acrostic written in a different style than I've seen previously. Very thought-provoking message, Joe. Love, Carolyn
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