Matthew Anish Poet Blank verse

Rave On

Cool, groovy, hip 
No bummers here 
Just a psychedelic love explosion 
A total gas 
We had a blast
The chicks were far out 
So many foxes
The babes were alright 
The whole scene was out of sight!
A good trip all told

This poem is circa the 1960's

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Richard Lamoureux June 23, 2015 at 7:52 AM Second last line you have an "a" that seems out of place. Otherwise I quite enjoyed this 60s moment.

Afolabi Muideen June 23, 2015 at 12:31 AM This is so intriguing you penned it beautifully.............A.M.

Casarah Nance June 22, 2015 at 5:43 PM Groovy baby, I dig it :-)

Emile Pinet June 22, 2015 at 5:14 PM You have managed to capture the spirit of the sixties well... cool. Emile.