Rave

Strobe lights flickered throughout the expanse. 
And with an array of varying colors, 
it displayed a mesmeric pattern that shadowed a deep entrancement. 
The sounds, an orchestra of chaos; so artfully unruly. 
Each thrashing bass, a seething burst of air, of vibration; it pulsated our bodies.
A constant, rippling sensation echoed, 
commanding movement to its every beat,
like listless puppets of the night dance.
Those around with blank faces, unknown and unheard of
So clustered, cluttered and concealed, 
visible only, were the split flashes of color. 
Arms, legs, constricted by space, 
but to each, it was our minds, 
a realm of boundlessness; a physical infinity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Valencia Avatar
January 30, 2013 at 1:37 AM
PLUR! Great poem, you should read my poem called Wonderland. I think you will relate.
Brown Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 6:36 AM
Congrats on your outstanding poetry being featured this week Thong. Love, Carol
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October 26, 2012 at 12:04 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this afternoon Thong. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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October 26, 2012 at 1:50 PM
Thank you for your warm comments! :)
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October 26, 2012 at 7:48 AM
Another weekend is here and I have not read as many poems as I would have liked to this week. I am happy I was able to read yours today. Have a wonderful weekend Thong. Hopefully I will be able to read more next week. Love, Carol
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