Ravaged Land
The red beating land covered in constant storms
The ground ravaged and torn apart
The inner thumps struggling to continue
Trying to survive the constant category F5
The sun rarely shines upon this red land
Dark black clouds in the air
Ground flooded with tears from the sky
Roots revealed and torn on the surface
Yet somehow the land continues
There's no scientific reason why
To thump and beat steadily
So the land can stay alive
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