Ratty Tat Tat Hat

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     My favorite hat hangs on a hook by our old back door
     It belongs to my honey, but it is a favorite of mine
     It isn’t pretty, in fact it’s a sight to deplore!
     It’s my hubby’s ball cap, and he thinks it is divine!
     In spite of the splotches, and the dirt and grime

     It’s a favorite of mine, because it’s a part of who he is
     He wears it while he’s working, until evening begins
     Running errands, doing chores, or playing with the kids
     He wears it to cover places, where his hair has gotten thin
     I'd like to toss it in the trash, but that old hat still brings a grin!

     How could I hope to disregard this hat that honors him?
     Looking like the boy I used to know
     With blue twinkling eyes, beneath the brim
     When he hangs it up, with a sweet “hello”
     My love is home, and my good fortune...Oh yes!... I know…
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Submitted for Carol Brown's Contest
My Favorite Hat or Bonnet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 10:39 PM
you made this extraordinary, carrie.. and an extraordinary top-hitting slot goes with it.. CONGRATS with love and huggs..:) nette
Freeman Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 6:24 PM
So cool to see you in the top 3 spot Carrie. So common a story, but so dear to many hearts and the pleasure was all mine. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honered third Place! Agape, Moses
Poet Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 10:36 AM
Excellent write Carrie!Congrats on your big win---kashinath
Phookan Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 1:54 AM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win Carrie. A beautifully penned poem on a very special hat.Emotions attached with it have been so aptly described.Love, Gautami
Johnson Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 11:12 PM
Smart attitude Carrie. He loves it so you love it. happy hat. Congratulations on yor win. Love, Joyce
Mannan Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 10:10 PM
I loved it, especially the last stanza. Many congrats for this win.
Mehta Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 4:59 PM
Congrats on the win, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 3:49 PM
Congrats Carrie on your super win for 3rd place in the bonnet contest my friend.. wonderful words to describe the theme luv.. enjoy another sweet success this happy weekend..
Mehta Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 2:56 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Carrie
Guzzi Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 2:22 PM
You always bring us right there with you! Lucky man he is! Congrad's Light & Love
George   Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 2:18 PM
Very endearing and heart-warming, Carrie. Many congrats on your win with this very touching Quintain. Lainie
Devonshire Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 1:51 PM
Big congratulations on your win, Carrie! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Carrie. The poems were all so good was hard to judge. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 9:24 AM
Your poem made me smile, Carrie. Men like to keep old, grimy hats around and still wear them even if you buy them new ones. Obviously, you both have sentimental attachment to this special hat. (Laughed at how your husband uses it to hide his thinning hair.) Enjoyed reading and wish you success in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn
Loving Iii Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 3:06 PM
not sure how i'd take it if it was about me. john
A   Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 2:16 PM
i like it,, sounds like a good hang out... good luck in contest,..p.d.
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