Rat Trap Rap, Part 2 of 2

There, parked in rows
like overused commas
or German prose
or mothballed bombers

lay ranks of rats
as if on drill,
but quite as dead
as vaudeville.

Someone had slit
each ventral hide
and pulled it back
to peek inside.

And there they lay,
flat on their backs,
guts on display,
paws pinned by tacks.

Ashamed, they were,
like party-crashers,
with gaping fur,
like little flashers.

Those organs, packed
so coral-fine,
would soon be hacked
by Class B-9.

Unseeing eyes 
stared at the ceiling,
but woke in me
a fellow-feeling.

We’re all the same.
We want to live.
Why dish out blame?
Why bring a sieve,

sort sheep from goats,
grandly decide 
who lives and dies?
To my distress,
those little guys
with upturned throats
and parted coats
were nothing less
than crucified.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 25, 2017 at 9:28 AM
Did this really happen? Although I had to chuckle at this: "You think me stupid? // Yes, indeed-o. // They led me upstairs // by the libido" // ... The rest is nothing to chuckle about, the opposite really. Those poor rats were crucified, the poor teacher in a way was too.....
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March 25, 2017 at 9:46 AM
That is horrible.
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March 25, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Yes, it happened.
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