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Rat

I followed a rat, I watched it burn. I followed a rat into the church, It saw a light but I watched it burn. I followed a rat, dressed in all white— The rat grew wings, but still, it burned. I carried a mouse, I watched it rise. I carried a mouse into the church, It found the wine, yet I watched it rise. I carried a mouse, dressed in Roman Olive— The mouse burned wings, yet I watched it rise.

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Date: 11/19/2024 5:06:00 PM
very creative poem, enjoyed, i don't like rats either yann
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JJ Wiparina
Date: 11/19/2024 6:31:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed!!
Date: 11/19/2024 1:26:00 PM
Bravo for the lowly mouse. I hate rats anyway
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JJ Wiparina
Date: 11/19/2024 1:33:00 PM
Poor rat

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