RAT

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For the 'Intro ''POI''-etry' Poetry Contest of Hilo

What was that
Running around, chased
By my cat?

With great haste
And also fear,
Away I raced.

My kitty dear
Thrashed a rat,
her new souvenir!

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Date: 5/20/2024 12:00:00 PM
Haha. The cat and the rat...love story. Nice one for William's new form. :)
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Date: 5/13/2024 6:43:00 PM
Andrea, you made this very cute and realistic. I take it you don't like rodent carcasses being thrown around.
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Date: 5/12/2024 11:57:00 AM
what a cute on Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/11/2024 3:53:00 PM
Ah, so cute-
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Date: 5/11/2024 6:45:00 AM
Great mouser I would say. I would love that cat. Every home needs a cat or two and a few geckos. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara K
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Date: 5/11/2024 1:59:00 AM
Dear sweet andrea, i havent really looked at this contest but it looks like an interesting one and rats! Ah iv had some crazy scary experiences with them. Im terrified by them. Very well written poem this is so cute and creative. The last line made me laugh. Hahah her souvenir. Best wishes for the contest sweet andrea. Hope for a win
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Date: 5/10/2024 10:04:00 PM
This is very cute Andrea. As you have cats at home, you must be watching such interesting scenes daily! All the Best in the contest.
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Date: 5/10/2024 9:28:00 PM
A very cute poem. You have a good friend which is your cat. I like how it spells rat.
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Date: 5/10/2024 3:31:00 PM
Very nicely done Andrea, I like the form
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Date: 5/10/2024 10:12:00 AM
Great way to use this form! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 5/10/2024 3:28:00 AM
You did well in this contest. Loved it though I don't like rats. I'm afraid of them. Hugs.xx
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