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RAT

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For the 'Intro ''POI''-etry' Poetry Contest of Hilo

What was that Running around, chased By my cat? With great haste And also fear, Away I raced. My kitty dear Thrashed a rat, her new souvenir!

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Duke Beaufort
Date: 5/13/2024 6:43:00 PM
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Andrea, you made this very cute and realistic. I take it you don't like rodent carcasses being thrown around.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/12/2024 11:57:00 AM
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what a cute on Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paige Hind
Date: 5/11/2024 3:53:00 PM
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Ah, so cute-
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/11/2024 6:45:00 AM
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Great mouser I would say. I would love that cat. Every home needs a cat or two and a few geckos. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara K
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/11/2024 1:59:00 AM
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Dear sweet andrea, i havent really looked at this contest but it looks like an interesting one and rats! Ah iv had some crazy scary experiences with them. Im terrified by them. Very well written poem this is so cute and creative. The last line made me laugh. Hahah her souvenir. Best wishes for the contest sweet andrea. Hope for a win
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Valsa George
Date: 5/10/2024 10:04:00 PM
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This is very cute Andrea. As you have cats at home, you must be watching such interesting scenes daily! All the Best in the contest.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/10/2024 9:28:00 PM
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A very cute poem. You have a good friend which is your cat. I like how it spells rat.
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Joseph May
Date: 5/10/2024 3:31:00 PM
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Very nicely done Andrea, I like the form
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2024 10:12:00 AM
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Great way to use this form! Hugs ~ Kim
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Buhagiar Victor
Date: 5/10/2024 3:28:00 AM
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You did well in this contest. Loved it though I don't like rats. I'm afraid of them. Hugs.xx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 5/9/2024 2:43:00 PM
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I've got to give this contest a try. You've inspired me to do so. Best wishes with the contest, hugs Sara
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