RAT

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For the 'Intro ''POI''-etry' Poetry Contest of Hilo

What was that Running around, chased By my cat? With great haste And also fear, Away I raced. My kitty dear Thrashed a rat, her new souvenir!

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/20/2024 12:00:00 PM

Haha. The cat and the rat...love story. Nice one for William's new form. :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/13/2024 6:43:00 PM

Andrea, you made this very cute and realistic. I take it you don't like rodent carcasses being thrown around.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/12/2024 11:57:00 AM

what a cute on Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Paige Hind

Date: 5/11/2024 3:53:00 PM

Ah, so cute-

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/11/2024 6:45:00 AM

Great mouser I would say. I would love that cat. Every home needs a cat or two and a few geckos. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 5/11/2024 1:59:00 AM

Dear sweet andrea, i havent really looked at this contest but it looks like an interesting one and rats! Ah iv had some crazy scary experiences with them. Im terrified by them. Very well written poem this is so cute and creative. The last line made me laugh. Hahah her souvenir. Best wishes for the contest sweet andrea. Hope for a win