RAT

What was that
Running around, chased
By my cat?

With great haste
And also fear,
Away I raced.

My kitty dear
Thrashed a rat,
her new souvenir!

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Linda Alice Fowler

May 20, 2024 at 12:00 PM

Haha. The cat and the rat...love story. Nice one for William's new form. :)

Duke Beaufort

May 13, 2024 at 6:43 PM

Andrea, you made this very cute and realistic. I take it you don't like rodent carcasses being thrown around.

Jan Allison

May 12, 2024 at 11:57 AM

what a cute on Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Paige Hind

May 11, 2024 at 3:53 PM

Ah, so cute-

Sara Kendrick

May 11, 2024 at 6:45 AM

Great mouser I would say. I would love that cat. Every home needs a cat or two and a few geckos. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara K

Ink Empress

May 11, 2024 at 1:59 AM

Dear sweet andrea, i havent really looked at this contest but it looks like an interesting one and rats! Ah iv had some crazy scary experiences with them. Im terrified by them. Very well written poem this is so cute and creative. The last line made me laugh. Hahah her souvenir. Best wishes for the contest sweet andrea. Hope for a win