Rat-A-Tat-Tat

Rat-a-tat, Rat-a-tat, Rat-a-tat-tat
  sounds of war, tattered fife, ragged drum

In feathered cap, Yankee Doodle went to town
  where he met a clever man named Madison

Wrote up a constitution, though not for everyone
  rights for whites -- but not for blacks or browns...

Now it's 2 1/2 strife-torn centuries later
  some love the USA; others hate her

Rat-a-tat, Rat-a-tat, Rat-a-tat-tat
  so many promises ~ fallen flat

Machine-gun fire nightly in 'most every city
  'Twas it all for naught ~ 'twould be a pity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 8/16/2021 12:09:00 PM
This is so true " Rat-a-tat, Rat-a-tat, Rat-a-tat-tat so many promises ~ fallen flat" So many!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/19/2021 10:42:00 PM
Rin-tin-tin. We blew it agin' ~ Your frin! gw
Date: 8/10/2021 6:06:00 PM
'twould be a pity indeed if we continue to machine gun down our constitution.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/10/2021 8:06:00 PM
Statues to Al Capone are hot among 'those in the know,' I hear. Lori Light and her pathetically inept Police Superintendent and Prosecuting Attorney don't want to know about that. Carry on, Soldier. ~ Gershon
Date: 8/10/2021 4:23:00 AM
Love it GERSHON. You are truly unique. Publish your works! This should be a POTD! A fav in my book. Panagiota
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/10/2021 7:55:00 PM
Thank you so much for making my evening with your gushing words of praise, Panagiota. Sure appreciate your encouragement! Hugs, Gershon
Date: 8/10/2021 1:45:00 AM
Great thought provoking poem, Gershon:)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/10/2021 8:06:00 PM
Hey, thanks for your kind words, Jo. Here's to the week ahead. :) gw
Date: 8/10/2021 12:45:00 AM
It does seem somewhere, one has lost the plot. As a citizen of any country that person's rights should be as others, no more no less. Love the poetry, it is so meaningful.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/10/2021 8:07:00 PM
Harry, appreciate your brilliant -- truly brilliant -- analysis of the situation... far better than my meager poem. Spot on, my friend. Here's to rewinding the plot. ~ Gershon
Date: 8/9/2021 9:45:00 PM
Ah, Gershon, you have given me much to think about here. I love the poem...will have to chew on it piece by piece. Not to do so would be "a pity."
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/10/2021 7:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Milt. Remember to chew well before you swallow anything though! Smiles, Gershon
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