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Raspberry Ripple Sundae

raspberry ripple sundae strawberry layered minty chocolate topping coconut topping 1 chocolate flake whipped cream wow!

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Arany P.

Date: 3/7/2009 4:02:00 AM

wow... so much in one treat!! love that ~ Arany

Fathima Dawood

Date: 3/7/2009 2:55:00 AM

Wow, I can feel my salivatory glands getting all excited just reading this. Yummilicious!!! Peace Fathima

Leon Wilson

Date: 3/7/2009 1:42:00 AM

Hi Sue Thank you for letting me know which group my poem should be in I've made the changes. You can share my sundae with me now. Leon

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/6/2009 5:31:00 PM

Each one seperately is yummy, but thrown together in one big sundae....now you're talkin'!! Good luck with this in the contest...and welcome to the soup!! ~ Carrie

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/6/2009 5:27:00 PM

Mint with raspberry and strawberry and coconut whoa baby what a concoction

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/6/2009 4:26:00 PM

MMM mmm Good!!!This is a sweet tasty treat indeed..Maybe too sweet for me, But what the heck, I guess I can cheat- just this once.LOL Good Job..God Bless and Welcome to PoetrySoup, I bet you already love it as much as I do..~Tyesha

Sue Mason

Date: 3/6/2009 4:04:00 PM

Yum, yum ... love this write, Leon and what you've done here is an EPULAERYU Form (see under Resources) not a Haiku. A Haiku is only three lines with a 5/7/5 syllable form. One of the great things about this site is all the things to learn about poetry ... smile ... hope you don't mind my comment. Welcome to the Soup!!