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raspberry recluse hiku

in iris i e s s l moon b l e e d s maroon waves of warmth ~ raspberry recluse

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/21/2025 3:02:00 PM

Interesting lines penned. I have enjoyed the raspberries this year. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Did you have some bad headaches here lately? Sara K

Paige Hind

Date: 6/21/2025 12:09:00 PM

This is very haunting and beautiful, Miss Hiya. A pleasure to read you also- and I hope you are well now. I think of this as ingenius, too- <3

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/21/2025 11:53:00 AM

Dear Hiya, how wonderful to see you here after such a long absence. Your beautiful haiku explores themes of loneliness, beauty, and the intricacy of daily life with reflection and passion. Your imagery mixes natural features like the moon and waves with human feelings like love and loneliness. Colors and fruits provide an aural wisdom, juxtaposing outward and inward emotions. Best for a win

Ink Empress

Date: 6/21/2025 11:25:00 AM

Yeay so happy to see you join hiku gang! You did a gorgeous one as always and i love the last line the most my angelic star “raspberry recluse” is stunning! And perfect finish line for this creative hiku so well shaped and delivered for brians contest! Moon does bleed such warmth that often fills our soul with hope and light and more! Youv nailed it! Best wishes and sending you light always!