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raspberry recluse hiku

 in iris    i        e s
                 s  l
                
 moon  
            b l e
                  e  d
                        s    maroon waves of warmth ~
             raspberry recluse

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Paula Goldsmith

July 2, 2025 at 2:00 PM

Congratulations on your fun win. I enjoyed reading your creative write. Have a blessed day with your win................

Susan Ashley

June 28, 2025 at 1:54 PM

Dear Hiya, whether you write a short form or a full length poem, your golden pen can't help but shine! Delectable imagery.. warm, colorful with sweet alliterations! "raspberry recluse" is exquisite! Warmest wishes, my poet friend.. ~Susan

Richard Lamoureux

June 27, 2025 at 7:14 AM

You shine in these short forms.

Anne Winter

June 24, 2025 at 6:47 PM

Dear Hiya, congratulations dear poet friend, you write beautifully! Aesthetically exquisite :) love, Anne

Valsa George

June 23, 2025 at 9:43 PM

Hi Hiya, your haiku has the flavor of raspberries and the might of waves. Also the glow of the moon and the inner depth of a recluse. Your choicest use of words and their alignment add beauty and depth to your works. I see that this is already a winner. Congratulations dear young poetess.

Joseph P. DiMino

June 23, 2025 at 9:31 AM

Congratulations! Lovely imagery...love the colors and sweet scents of this work. Well done!

Andrea Dietrich

June 22, 2025 at 12:03 PM

Oh and I saw it got a nice win. Congrats

Hiya Sharma

June 24, 2025 at 10:10 PM

You're too kind! I'm grateful for your beautiful words of support and kindness always. It was my first time trying a 'hiku', so enjoyed writing it :) sending light and best wishes to u always.

Andrea Dietrich

June 22, 2025 at 11:40 AM

Gorgeous one, Hiya

Hiya Sharma

June 24, 2025 at 10:08 PM

Aww, thank you sweet Andrea! I'm so happy that you liked this one :)

Kim Rodrigues

June 22, 2025 at 10:58 AM

Emotive write with tasty hues!

Hiya Sharma

June 24, 2025 at 10:08 PM

Thank you so much, lovely Kim! I appreciate your kind and splendid words always, sending love and light your way ~

Sara Kendrick

June 21, 2025 at 3:02 PM

Interesting lines penned. I have enjoyed the raspberries this year. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Did you have some bad headaches here lately? Sara K

Hiya Sharma

June 24, 2025 at 10:07 PM

Oh, glad you enjoyed the raspberries dear Sara, I love them too! I enjoyed writing this lil piece, an interesting form to try. And yes, I have been absent from here lately owing to my bad health, having asthma and high blood pressure, it certainly got tough. But I'm focusing on healing and being able to be present here as much as I can :) thank you for your kindness, sweet soul!

Paige Hind

June 21, 2025 at 12:09 PM

This is very haunting and beautiful, Miss Hiya. A pleasure to read you also- and I hope you are well now. I think of this as ingenius, too- <3

Hiya Sharma

June 21, 2025 at 10:24 PM

Awwn thank you so much dear Paige, you're truly kind as always. I'm still in the state of recovering, feeling very dizzy with weakness because of the asthma medicines n everything. Slowly catching up! :) m so glad you enjoyed reading this one!

Sotto Poet

June 21, 2025 at 11:53 AM

Dear Hiya, how wonderful to see you here after such a long absence. Your beautiful haiku explores themes of loneliness, beauty, and the intricacy of daily life with reflection and passion. Your imagery mixes natural features like the moon and waves with human feelings like love and loneliness. Colors and fruits provide an aural wisdom, juxtaposing outward and inward emotions. Best for a win

Hiya Sharma

June 21, 2025 at 10:21 PM

Dear Sotto, it's so kind of you to bless my poem with such a detailed and in depth review! My heart is full to know that you could see and feel the depth of what I intended to convey here. Feels really nice to be back here, indeed, as I've been unwell and focusing my time on healing. Slowly catching up! Sending light and best wishes to you always :)

Ink Empress

June 21, 2025 at 11:25 AM

Yeay so happy to see you join hiku gang! You did a gorgeous one as always and i love the last line the most my angelic star “raspberry recluse” is stunning! And perfect finish line for this creative hiku so well shaped and delivered for brians contest! Moon does bleed such warmth that often fills our soul with hope and light and more! Youv nailed it! Best wishes and sending you light always!

Hiya Sharma

June 21, 2025 at 10:19 PM

Yeaaay I'm so happy to be back indeed and joining in this hiku train, haha, feels lovely! and the credit goes to you for letting me know about this form, my dear ink! Thank you so much for sprinkling glitters of warmth on my poems always, your words are most cherished :)

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