Raspberry

raspberry bushes basket in one hand ~ other shooing snakes AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on June 1, 2018

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/1/2018 10:26:00 PM

Very good haiku, Line! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/2/2018 8:18:00 AM

Thank you, Janice. Much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/1/2018 5:56:00 PM

Great images, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/1/2018 7:39:00 PM

Thanks, Kim.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/1/2018 2:17:00 PM

I can picture that Line. Well done :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/1/2018 7:40:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/1/2018 11:55:00 AM

what a super haiku Line, I've got raspberry canes in my garden as they are on of my favourite fruits... thankfully we don't have any snakes on our Island !:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/1/2018 7:41:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit, Jan. You have the correct wording too. Excellent. Raspberries are my favorite too.