Rare Are We

To me it's always been crystal clear my emerald heart sheds tear after tear Intense, easy to emote it's to love I devote His golden flakes beat in me like needs I fill my lungs string him in like beads As rare as four leaf clovers - we are for real I must bare my heart for him to also feel

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2017 8:02:00 PM

I'm going down your list and also seeing best and second best poems . Hmmm, I think I may have seen all your poems!!

Carol B.
Date: 8/5/2017 8:26:00 PM

Andrea, Thanks for the visit. I will have to get cracking and start writing. Make more of an effort to find the time. :). Have a great weekend.

Bawa Talwar

Date: 4/14/2017 2:18:00 AM

Truly appreciate your work.its simply a light romance which is adorable. Kindly Review my works too I've just joined.

William Darnell Sr

Date: 4/13/2017 9:27:00 PM

Very very well written. Thanks for allowing me to read it! I loved it. Sincerely, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2017 8:17:00 PM

Your SECOND best one! Seeing it again, it is one of your best in my eyes too.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 12/2/2016 8:39:00 PM

Not sure who you have in mind in this lovely poem, Carol. Love the third stanza. Thanks for stopping by. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M

Carol B.
Date: 12/2/2016 10:04:00 PM

Maurice so happy you liked the poem and thank you for the kind comment. :)

Darren White

Date: 11/24/2016 11:40:00 PM

You sometimes like my poems and specific lines in them, well... I LOVE this little poem, and especially this: "His golden flakes beat in me like needs ..//.. I fill my lungs string him in like beads". A fave.

Carol B.
Date: 11/25/2016 12:18:00 AM

Darren I am really happy you liked this poem :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/19/2016 11:20:00 AM

This is a beautiful, simply beautiful love poem, Carol. It is going in my fave for sure. So elegantly expressed w/the sensitivity of a true poetess. #realtalented. Great write. Love and blessings to you, dear lady.

Carol B.
Date: 11/19/2016 1:58:00 PM

Freddie, I really appreciate your kind words and for faving my poem. I have just recently started writing poetry and feel blessed you like my poems.