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Rare Are We


To me it's always been crystal clear
my emerald heart sheds tear after tear

Intense, easy to emote
it's to love I devote 

His golden flakes beat in me like needs
I fill my lungs string him in like beads

As rare as four leaf clovers - we are for real
I  must bare my heart for him to also feel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/5/2017 8:02:00 PM
I'm going down your list and also seeing best and second best poems . Hmmm, I think I may have seen all your poems!!
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Carol B.
Date: 8/5/2017 8:26:00 PM
Andrea, Thanks for the visit. I will have to get cracking and start writing. Make more of an effort to find the time. :). Have a great weekend.
Date: 4/14/2017 2:18:00 AM
Truly appreciate your work.its simply a light romance which is adorable. Kindly Review my works too I've just joined.
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Date: 4/13/2017 9:27:00 PM
Very very well written. Thanks for allowing me to read it! I loved it. Sincerely, William
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Date: 2/10/2017 8:17:00 PM
Your SECOND best one! Seeing it again, it is one of your best in my eyes too.
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Date: 12/2/2016 8:39:00 PM
Not sure who you have in mind in this lovely poem, Carol. Love the third stanza. Thanks for stopping by. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Carol B.
Date: 12/2/2016 10:04:00 PM
Maurice so happy you liked the poem and thank you for the kind comment. :)
Date: 11/24/2016 11:40:00 PM
You sometimes like my poems and specific lines in them, well... I LOVE this little poem, and especially this: "His golden flakes beat in me like needs ..//.. I fill my lungs string him in like beads". A fave.
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Carol B.
Date: 11/25/2016 12:18:00 AM
Darren I am really happy you liked this poem :)
Date: 11/19/2016 11:20:00 AM
This is a beautiful, simply beautiful love poem, Carol. It is going in my fave for sure. So elegantly expressed w/the sensitivity of a true poetess. #realtalented. Great write. Love and blessings to you, dear lady.
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Carol B.
Date: 11/19/2016 1:58:00 PM
Freddie, I really appreciate your kind words and for faving my poem. I have just recently started writing poetry and feel blessed you like my poems.
Date: 11/8/2016 2:07:00 PM
Though a hint of sadness flows through your poem I can also feel the joy and it is much more evident. Nicely done Carol.
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Carol B.
Date: 11/8/2016 4:22:00 PM
Thanks Chris :)
Date: 11/6/2016 12:38:00 AM
I can only say, I hope you keep writing and writing! :)
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Carol B.
Date: 11/6/2016 11:06:00 PM
Arthur, Thank you for the kind comment :)
Date: 10/30/2016 3:30:00 PM
It is good to let those we love know that they are loved. You are wise.
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Date: 10/28/2016 7:47:00 PM
I have no doubt he feels it.
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Carol B.
Date: 10/28/2016 11:45:00 PM
I don't want to have any regrets. I try and tell the people I love just how much I love them and how important they are to me.
Date: 10/24/2016 6:14:00 PM
this is very lovely metaphor, CArol.
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Date: 10/23/2016 5:41:00 PM
That is a nice and interesting piece of writing to read. Well done! :)
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Carol B.
Date: 10/23/2016 11:12:00 PM
Thanks Heidi :)
Date: 9/24/2016 3:25:00 AM
I enjoyed this, Carol. Romance....I loved the fifth line...pure magic. :)
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Carol B.
Date: 10/7/2016 11:54:00 AM
Thank you :)
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Carol B.
Date: 10/7/2016 11:52:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/20/2016 4:02:00 PM
a beautiful love poem Carol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Carol B.
Date: 9/20/2016 5:16:00 PM
Thanks :)
Date: 9/20/2016 3:50:00 PM
Carol, a sweet way to express the rarity of true love. If it's meant to be, it is perfect. LINDA
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Carol B.
Date: 9/20/2016 5:12:00 PM
Thanks so much for your lovely comment :) Carol