Rare

Life is like a plant
with shades of many colors
all unique within their roots
longing for space to breathe
compassion to blossom 
determination to exist 
and love to flourish

introspectionlifefree verse

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John Rhinem

Date: 2/28/2009 4:07:00 PM

"Hello Again Gifted and Precious Tyesha!!!"-Another perfectly flowing and wonderful write here dear lady!! Showing once again, "The Treasure" of Your blessed pen!! Filled with this reflection I do believe, once again, of whom You truly are~for one can see soo much, within a writers words!!? And Your words, seem to be so, "Beautiful!!!"~"Excellent Tyesha!!!"~Again, "Much Love and Many Blessings, To 'You and Your Loves,' Always, John!!!"~Bye Dear Lady!!!:))

Jay Loveless

Date: 2/6/2009 9:30:00 AM

Tyesha, this is a sweet poem, I love the metaphor. It reminded me of one of my favorite songs, I dont know who its by but I think its called The Rose. Listen to it soimetime, maybe it will inspire you, idk, but keep it up. ~Jese

Sue Mason

Date: 2/5/2009 4:28:00 PM

Awesome perspective on Life, Tyesha ... now if we could just get rid of all the pesticides ... smile ...

Mary Duhart

Date: 1/31/2009 5:26:00 AM

Great analogy..you just never know what life will bring.Maybe a rose and it may be a thorn..Great write. Continue to share.

Gregory Golden

Date: 1/31/2009 4:16:00 AM

This poem blooms with expression and great anticipation. We must keep growing and knowing through poetry. Let God be your inspiration. just look up at the stars, at night.