Raptureless

There once was a man most pious
Who felt his predictions had no bias
  Of rapture he spouted
  While the world simply doubted
He simply ensnared the more gullible of us
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 5:58 AM
Thank you for posting and allowing us to enter into your world of poetry today. The diversity of our poets and their poetry here at PoetrySoup is astounding. It was my pleasure to read your poetry today Renee. Love, Carol
Kelly Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 6:57 AM
Carol - thanks for stopping by and reading :) I've definitely decided limericks are easier for me to write. And the Camping fiasco has me thinking of the kids who are affected by all this.
Mehta Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 3:27 PM
Very enjoyable and humorous with wit, renee, I also posted two limericks on the same theme today.
Kelly Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 3:30 PM
Thank you! I really do like writing limericks. This one wasn't so easy as there aren't a lot of words that rhyme with pious and bias :)
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