William Kelii Kekaula Poet Quatern

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Raptured In Heaven

*Image Raptured in Heaven by Pint.

Raptured in Heaven

The unearth enraptured in Heaven's flock,
Those who have mourned, the meek, and merciful,
Answers to who holds the key to unlock,
Plus, hungry and thirsty righteous dreamful.

Newness befalls refreshed innocent breathes,
The unearth enraptured in Heaven's flock,
True turtledoves hail friendly laurel wreathes,
Harmonious life will be a cakewalk.

It is Grace who's at your door, comes a knock,
Your soul chronicled in the Book of Life,
The unearth enraptured in Heaven's flock,
Preparations made for your afterlife.

Prayers gifts comfort, freed from the abyss,
Your salvation resources round-the-clock,
He kept His promise--everlasting bliss,
The unearth enraptured in Heaven's flock.

2023 February 02
*10th Place*
YOUR OPTION
~Brian Strand: Judged 2023 February 06

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Sara Kendrick February 6, 2023 at 11:41 AM Way to go in Brian's contest. Your name is on the list of winners'. Wave the banner high. Thanks for sharing this work. Sara William Kelii Kekaula February 6, 2023 at 9:05 PM Sara, I'm grateful for the noted measure garnered, thank you, and Aloha William

Linda Alice Fowler February 6, 2023 at 7:47 AM Ah William. Another sensuous write from your heart. I love the concept of freedom in heaven, joining with "Heaven's flock". Congratulations on your win! :) William Kelii Kekaula February 6, 2023 at 8:07 AM A heart filled with gratefulness, Linda, for your generous uplifting words, thank you and Aloha William

Sotto Poet February 3, 2023 at 6:12 AM William, you have painted such beautiful pictures with your poems and the settings that you have described. You have, as usual, done a wonderful job expressing your individual perspective on heaven after death and the hope that you have for it. William Kelii Kekaula February 3, 2023 at 7:51 PM Lasaad, I'm grateful for your astute observations of my inspirations brought about via my upbringing, surrounded by love once shared awaiting that one they left behind. I write of our rejoining, signaling the final separation, Aloha William