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Rapture In Raindrops

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These eyes watch the fierce rain passing through as earth moves, vibrating once more my being shakes again sensing you somehow, yes- stronger than before This heart, the beat quickens with each sound breath is taken, and so deeply air presses, it thickens I have found raindrops bring you so close to me These emotions, my heart a quick glance as the wild wind twists in my hair striving to pull apart just the chance of me feeling you, everywhere ------------------------ ~ You are in the waters touch ~ Powerful Moments Form of Poetry~ Tri-fall The rhyme scheme is a,b,c,a,b,c and meter for each stanza is as follows: 6/3/8, 6/3/8. This form requires little to no punctuation and can be written on any subject matter.

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Joseph May

Date: 4/19/2023 7:40:00 AM

Finding the heartbeat of love in a rain storm, Beautifully pennedBrandy, hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/19/2023 6:46:00 PM

Even through a rainstorm, hearts can find each other, because the connection is so powerful. Thank you, Joseph. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Lewis Raynes

Date: 3/10/2020 10:41:00 PM

This poem got me at the beginning and i was in for the wonderful ride, great write Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/10/2020 10:49:00 PM

I love everything about the rain!! You and your thoughts are appreciated. A wonderful ride? Sounds good to me. :) Thank you Lewis. :) Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/1/2018 9:17:00 PM

Your poems are full of action! And the unique thought...raindrops bring you close.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/1/2018 10:47:00 PM

Such a wonderful thing to say. Thank you Kim. I appreciate your lovely comment. :) The rain inspires me. ~ Brandy

Jesse Rowe

Date: 9/28/2018 7:48:00 AM

This is a very impressive piece. The words flow together so exquisitely it is a wonder that they fit into such a demanding scheme. A FAV for me.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/28/2018 6:41:00 PM

These words found me, and when they did- I placed them upon the page. I wanted to use them in this form, it is one that I enjoy letting my thoughts curl around sometimes. I am smiling because you have placed this little scribble of mine in your favorites. :) Thank you Jesse for your wonderful comment. ~ Brandy

Mark Toney

Date: 9/19/2018 2:30:00 PM

Brandy, thank you for your lovely poem and the introduction to yet another poetry form. I will give the Tri-fall a try, and hope I won’t fall :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/19/2018 5:36:00 PM

:) Soft giggle. You are very welcome Mark. I was challenged to write in this form many years ago. I really like it. Awe, I don't think you will faaaalll. :) If you do, your words will catch you. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 9/12/2018 8:35:00 PM

All that keeps going through my head while reading this beautiful poem is that song "Raindrops keep falling on my head" lol A wonderful write, Brandy. Wouldn't ya know it- it's raining outside as I speak. Love this..Charlie

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/12/2018 10:08:00 PM

I love that song. :) And even though it isn't playing here within this poem- it certainly could. In this poem, it feels like a thunderstorm is surrounding each moment. The wind, the rain- as it plays with force. :) How awesome that it was raining, as you wrote this comment. Thank you Charlie. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/12/2018 12:36:00 AM

I too am drawn to the rain. A passionate piece that soaks to ones core.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/12/2018 3:24:00 PM

Thank you Richard. Yes, many emotions curl around the waters touch. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Vincent Flannery

Date: 9/11/2018 10:23:00 AM

Great peice Brandy One very easy to relate to and feel all the different emotions with all of our senses being involved..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/11/2018 1:48:00 PM

Thank you Vincent. Your kind words are appreciated. You are right, many emotions curl around this. ~ Brandy

Silent One

Date: 9/11/2018 6:53:00 AM

You really have a way with words... Love that title.. I do like a bit of alliteraton..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/11/2018 10:14:00 AM

Thank you Silent One. These words found me, and when they did- they were placed upon the page. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 9/10/2018 12:17:00 PM

Beautiful work. It looks like someone has been very inspired as of late. It will take me the afternoon to take your new writes in. Keep it up! TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/10/2018 6:23:00 PM

Inspiration is everywhere, and I am inspired!! :) Thank you Tobey for your lovely comment and for reading my words of poetry. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/10/2018 10:44:00 AM

We're all tri-falling for your poetry...pass me the butter and that hot knife lol...love & light...^WW^

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/10/2018 2:14:00 PM

Is that so?? I don't know about that. :) You make me smile and giggle with this thought. Thank you Winged Warrior. I am passing you that knife now, with the butter. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 9/10/2018 4:31:00 AM

Brandy, thank you for finding another form that I was not familiar with and sharing it with us. You have written a beautiful poem in this form. May the raindrops always bring love to your heart. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/10/2018 2:06:00 PM

You are very welcome John. I enjoy writing using this form, and there is another that I want to share here as well. Thank you for your lovely thoughts. The rain is calm, soothing, mesmerizing, wild and playful. Even sensual. It can even hide the tears. I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy

Lyric Man

Date: 9/9/2018 10:57:00 PM

..then let it rain. Let it pour. May thunderclaps knock on your door. Come out in the rain. Let it run down your skin. Close your eyes until you feel me back again... I love your artistry B!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/10/2018 2:01:00 PM

My thoughts exactly Lyric Man!!! Let it rain, let it rain, let it rain. :) Let the moments touch all of me. I do love the waters touch. Your thoughts are playfully poetic. I appreciate you. ~ Brandy