Rapture

Let us embrace
the dark
with love and rapture.

With a passion
that overthrows life
a riot in our hearts.

Light a candle
we feel
the vibration
coming from the flame.

It burns it's way
into our psyche
clear as a crystal
we possess an eagles eye.

I lay bare before you
feeling content
loving you
in your nakedness...
~ ~ ~ ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 8:32 PM
very beautifully painted piece ken always the excellent pen buddy
Onclaud Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 11:30 AM
so dreamy and beautifully scribed, ken!.. huggs
Carroll Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 1:34 PM
Thank you Nette!
Horsman Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 10:38 AM
Oh this is awesome, Ken.
Carroll Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 10:44 AM
Thank you Harry!
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 1:36 AM
a very nice one here. Sensual.
Carroll Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 5:55 AM
Thanks Andrea!
A   Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 11:32 PM
You are welcome Ken :)
Carroll Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 11:37 PM
:)
A   Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 11:12 PM
WOW! Ken, this poem's got the burn in it... In a good way, I see.. Wishing you, and your loved one a peaceful evening... Linda
Carroll Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 11:26 PM
Thank you Linda and good to reaqd from you!
Carroll Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 11:26 PM
Read..lol
Manassian Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 9:43 PM
How delicious and sweet. Lovely...as always
Manassian Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 10:13 PM
I enjoy my visits here. The world is full of people who have not a clue what passion is all about. I see that in you passion has found a home.
Carroll Avatar
August 14, 2014 at 10:11 PM
Thank you Eileen for your kind visits!
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