Rapt Yet Sad

I’m rapt, yet sad those times I see that boy who means the world to me. When he walks in, I cannot take my eyes off him, nor can I break the spell he weaves so seamlessly! How can I ever be set free from eyes as azure as the sea? I’m dreaming, yet I dream awake I’m rapt, yet sad. With him I’d know felicity. However, it is lunacy to think that I could ever make him mine! My heart will ever ache, for he’s with HER, so it can't be! I'm rapt, yet sad. June 29, 2017 for the Form R Contest of Broken Wings My choice of words: #2 Rapt. Poetry form choice: Rondeau

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Date: 7/16/2017 2:09:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 7/15/2017 10:15:00 PM
Great word choice, great write, and great win Andrea :)
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Date: 7/5/2017 12:07:00 PM
Aww...so sad ..what can't be...why does it happen to be like this at time...I enjoy this one Andrea. Good luck :))
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Date: 7/4/2017 8:39:00 AM
Oh my goodness! This is why I always miss your work when I stay away from this site for a while. Your choice of words and perfect blend of a cute message is beyond description. This is definitely good..
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Date: 7/3/2017 10:36:00 AM
This speaks deeply to me Andrea. Beautifully written.
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Date: 7/2/2017 5:03:00 PM
That boy must have really had an affect on you Andrea. If I used affect correctly? I have a problem with effect and affect like many do. A wonderful creative Rondeau for the contest Andrea. : )
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Date: 7/2/2017 11:03:00 PM
this happened a number of times in my youth! Luckily I got to meet men also who liked me back!
Date: 7/2/2017 2:26:00 AM
Excellent rondeau. Cleverly penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/1/2017 5:10:00 PM
Aweseome rondeau, Andrea. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/1/2017 2:37:00 PM
love this clever write, my friend
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Date: 7/1/2017 9:57:00 AM
Hi Andrea, i love the style and the content of this work. I love the deep felt emotion within this piece. This is an excellent piece of poetry. This one should do well in the contest Andrea. A beautiful write. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 6/30/2017 8:07:00 PM
Torn between two emotions...Very nicely penned Andrea
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Date: 6/30/2017 6:04:00 PM
This was really nice Andrea. Your poem had a lively feel even though sadness was woven throughout. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 6/30/2017 2:05:00 PM
Nice poem Andrea, I've read a couple of your poems in different forms with a similar theme and have notice you seem to be in the role as the young woman with wishes and dreams from afar...good luck this should place well..oh and me my theme seems to be used and left in total abandonment
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Date: 6/30/2017 11:03:00 AM
I enjoy the most when poets pour their hearts out and I get to read them. Fine Rondeau, Andrea.
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Date: 6/30/2017 8:35:00 AM
Nice piece there Andrea!
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Date: 6/30/2017 8:21:00 AM
Wonderful writing andrea!! Love, has it ever been easy!!??
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Date: 6/30/2017 8:02:00 AM
Really nice rondeau, Andrea. A little sad but so is love. You seem like the type that would be a stalker. Lol Won't take no for an answer:)
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Date: 6/30/2017 5:54:00 AM
What a beautiful, though sad rondeau, Andrea! I like it and so will Constance, I feel:)
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Date: 6/30/2017 3:33:00 AM
Beautifully done, Andrea! Enjoy your holiday and best of luck to you
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Date: 6/30/2017 2:51:00 AM
Aww unrequited love - what a sad poem Andrea but oh so beautifully written it flows so wonderfully! I've never tried this form and seen several examples for the contest - I MUST try it one day:-) hugs Jan xx
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