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lingering in the moment stretching the sun takes a final bow slow motion a curtsy and kiss goodnight Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~SUNLIT RIPPLES~ 2019 AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on May 17, 2020 for contest BRIAN'S CHOICE J sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 3RD Posted on December 12, 2019

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D.W. Rodgers

Date: 5/22/2020 9:15:00 AM

You've captured a sense of wonder in ten lines. congrats on your win

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2020 10:41:00 PM

Thanks, DW. Much appreciated.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/17/2020 11:37:00 PM

Love the curtsy and the kiss goodnight, Line. A moment in time so wonderfully expressed in your vivid imagery. I was taken into your moment from the word lingering! Congratulations on your win! Besides, I love sunsets!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/18/2020 12:28:00 AM

Thank you, Sam. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 12/16/2019 3:46:00 PM

I like the kiss good night!

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/16/2019 4:27:00 PM

Nothing like connecting with the sunrise and sunset hours - a kiss in the morning and a kiss at night. I had a fabulous summer of doing just that. I recommend it highly. LOL