Rapid Winter Blue

Well, another sad one. Yet it is tempered by the beauty of winter. I find it amazing that something so beautiful could be so deadly. Very good scenes; I'm right there with you.

Summers here, picnics & block parties.. Baby blue skies, bikinis & mesh..... Best time of the year..... Good poem my friend....:JP]

This poem is as hard and cold as the winter dear poet ! *smiles* james

Charmaine, i actually liked this piece. One thing it is not and that's dull. Its deep, moody, emotional > one has to look beyond the words sometimes when reading classic poetry like this >> James

I am enjoying reading fresh poetry today. What a wonderful thing to do on this rainy day. I am so happy your poetry was among what I have read and enjoyed today Charmaine. Honey you just write from your heart and be true to yourself and your poetry as always. That is where the best poetry comes from. Love, Carol

Good job and really good poem keep up the work

charma my favorite speaker of truth who's always on my whiskey laced mind. yes you may be a beauthy but as the comment below shows your a pistol to haha we need to take a trip across the desert and hit vegas and leave like bandits with the sunset with pockets full of gold cheers my friend always Gonzo

Sylvia Esther im usually a kind person.. but im not in the mood today... i ve seen the discouraging comments you leave on other writers work....but re your comment i tell you thankyou,you got the concept,thats how im feeling dull..and thats what s written,when im happier you ll see some snowman with a glowing nose,hope I can feel dull for a day in a lifetime at least,and its ok to leave dull comments on my poetry,but pls stop discouraging the new writers..tnks again..Charma